Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth and resources among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizen themselves? v.10
Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth and resources among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizen themselves? v. 10
It is true that many countries of this world are facing different types of problems especially they have the lack of food and appropriate education. It is frequently believed that it is the responsibility of the richer country to provide these basic things to the poorer country. However, this serious issue is refuted by others. These arguments will be analysed prior to coming to a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, today, many hold the idea that it is the moral and ethical duty of the wealthier nations to help the developing countries who are confronting the many problems such as war, famine, drought, lack of food and appropriate education system etc. For instance, many countries, Afghanistan and Iraq in particular, have serious problem with these issues. Many people of these countries are living without enough food. Moreover, the governments of these countries don’t have ample amount of money to build a suitable education system for their people. This example makes it clear that these countries would not be able to improve from this miserable condition without help. That is why many people believe that aid is indispensable for these poor countries.
On the other hand, it is felt by many that the governments of the poorer countries should solve these dangerous problems for many reasons. Firstly, when the richer country gives money as a support for the poorer country, they also want to control the regimes of the poor countries, which may have brought the catastrophic effect on the underdeveloped country. Secondly, the administration of the poorer nation is not so experienced, so they maybe not able to properly utilise these supported things. Finally, most governments of the poorer countries are corrupted, so there is a great risk to misuse these supported things. For these reasons, many are against of this idea.
In conclusion, after conducting these analyses, it is clear that both points of view have logical arguments. However, in my opinion, the governments of the poorer countries should take the responsibility of their people. Otherwise, the richer country will control the poorer country.
It is true that
many
countries
of this world are facing
different
types of
problems
especially
they have the lack of food and appropriate education. It is
frequently
believed that it is the responsibility of the richer
country
to provide these basic things to the
poorer
country
.
However
, this serious issue
is refuted
by others. These arguments will be
analysed
prior to coming to a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand,
today
,
many hold
the
idea
that it is the moral and ethical duty of the wealthier nations to
help
the developing
countries
who are confronting the
many
problems
such as war, famine, drought, lack of food and appropriate education system etc.
For instance
,
many
countries
, Afghanistan and Iraq
in particular
, have serious
problem
with these issues.
Many
people
of these
countries
are living without
enough
food.
Moreover
, the
governments
of these
countries
don’t have ample amount of money to build a suitable education system for their
people
. This example
makes
it
clear
that these
countries
would not be able to
improve
from this miserable condition without
help
.
That is
why
many
people
believe that aid is indispensable for these poor countries.
On the other hand
, it
is felt
by
many
that the
governments
of the
poorer
countries
should solve these
dangerous
problems
for
many
reasons.
Firstly
, when the richer
country
gives money as a support for the
poorer
country
, they
also
want to control the regimes of the poor
countries
, which may have brought the catastrophic effect on the underdeveloped
country
.
Secondly
, the administration of the
poorer
nation is not
so
experienced,
so
they maybe not able to
properly
utilise
these supported things.
Finally
, most
governments
of the
poorer
countries
are corrupted
,
so
there is a great
risk
to misuse these supported things. For these reasons,
many
are against of this
idea
.
In conclusion
, after conducting these analyses, it is
clear
that both points of view have logical arguments.
However
, in my opinion, the
governments
of the
poorer
countries
should take the responsibility of their
people
.
Otherwise
, the richer
country
will control the
poorer
country
.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes