Should parents be obligated to immunize their children against common childhood diseases? Or do individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children? What is your view of this practice? v.1
Should parents be obligated to immunize their children against common childhood diseases? Or do individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children? What is your view of this practice? v. 1
These days, media platforms are a forward step to improve human life. However, they bring some backwards such as violence which make parents worried about their children. It is very crucial to find out considerable reasons and to look for solutions to tackle the problem.
First of all, violence has impacts on children because they spend more time on playing video games. This is mainly caused by youngsters do not have more outside activities to do. They also do not find highly educational programmes which are so fascinating to enjoy. Therefore, they consider violent games as the best way to entertain during leisure time. Gradually, violent games become the indispensable part of children's life. To solve the problem, a realistic scenario can be applied that the government should build centres for children to spend their time on playing and studying together. For instance, in Vietnam, every district in Ho Chi Minh City has a public place where children can study dance, music, art and so on every day.
Second of all, TV shows often contain violence to attract viewers. If there were not violent scene, TV shows would be too depressing. As a result, broadcasts would face with bankruptcy. In contrast, the fact has negative effects on behaviour of children. In other words, viewers may be stimulated their brain by violent shows which encourage viewers to do the same things in the real life. To tackle the problem, the education from parents plays an important role. Parents should spend more time on their children to educate their children about backwards of violent shows. For example, parents and children can watch scientific programs together to encourage children to discover the world.
To conclude, children are impacted by violence from console games, TV shows since they spend more time on things containing lots of violence. To solve the problem, the role of the government and parents is so important.
These days, media platforms are a forward step to
improve
human life.
However
, they bring
some
backwards such as
violence
which
make
parents
worried about their
children
. It is
very
crucial to find out considerable reasons and to look for solutions to tackle the problem.
First of all
,
violence
has impacts on
children
because
they
spend
more
time
on playing video
games
. This is
mainly
caused by youngsters do not have more outside activities to do. They
also
do not find
highly
educational
programmes
which are
so
fascinating to enjoy.
Therefore
, they consider
violent
games
as the best way to entertain during leisure
time
.
Gradually
,
violent
games
become the indispensable part of children's life. To solve the problem, a realistic scenario can
be applied
that the
government
should build
centres
for
children
to
spend
their
time
on playing and studying together.
For instance
, in Vietnam, every district in Ho Chi Minh City has a public place where
children
can study dance, music, art and
so
on every day.
Second of all, TV
shows
often
contain
violence
to attract viewers. If there were not
violent
scene, TV
shows
would be too depressing.
As a result
, broadcasts would face with bankruptcy.
In contrast
, the fact has
negative
effects on
behaviour
of
children
.
In other words
, viewers may
be stimulated
their brain by
violent
shows
which encourage viewers to do the same things in the real life. To tackle the problem, the education from
parents
plays an
important
role.
Parents
should
spend
more
time
on their
children
to educate their
children
about backwards of
violent
shows
.
For example
,
parents
and
children
can
watch
scientific programs together to encourage
children
to discover the world.
To conclude
,
children
are impacted
by
violence
from console
games
, TV
shows
since they
spend
more
time
on things containing lots of
violence
. To solve the problem, the role of the
government
and
parents
is
so
important
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes