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Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings? v.7

Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings? v. 7
Past and future have to be a part of every city's characteristics; this is what makes cities different and diverse. That’s how we get attracted to one city and feels bored at another. Walking in the streets alone should give us an idea of the history of the city or how technologically advanced it is. So, I think it is a critical task and an influencing one on the inhabitants of the city to decide what historical buildings to keep and what to replace with modern iconic ones. This balance can keep the soul of a city and still hold a place on the race of development. On another hand, I think it is crucial to keep a significant amount of any city's historical buildings as it teaches people about their past and how they actually developed, it grows a sense of loyalty and patriotism; it increases the feeling of ownership and in return preservation. In general these impacts positively on society and on the message any visitor leaves with after a visit. Here comes to mind how the city of Munich in Germany rebuilt and still most of the historical buildings destroyed during the world war two, it is an accurate imitation of the original destroyed building using archived photos and old blueprints, this shows how significant history is to their culture and way of life. In brief, it's not the buildings that are preserved, it's the history, the stories behind those buildings and the people spent parts of their lives on those buildings, preserving all this will never happen unless there are still remains of their presence and those buildings stands as a witness and a living proof of this existence.
Past and future
have to
be a part of every city's characteristics; this is what
makes
cities
different
and diverse. That’s how we
get
attracted to one city and feels bored at another. Walking in the streets alone should give us an
idea
of the history of the city or how
technologically
advanced it is.
So
, I
think
it is a critical task and an influencing one on the inhabitants of the city to decide what historical
buildings
to
keep
and what to replace with modern iconic ones. This balance can
keep
the soul of a city and
still
hold a place on the race of development.

On another hand, I
think
it is crucial to
keep
a significant amount of any city's historical
buildings
as it teaches
people
about their past and how they actually developed, it grows a sense of loyalty and patriotism; it increases the feeling of ownership and in return preservation.
In general
these impacts
positively
on society and on the message any visitor
leaves
with after a visit.

Here
comes
to mind how the city of Munich in Germany rebuilt and
still
most of the historical
buildings
destroyed
during the world war two, it is an accurate imitation of the original
destroyed
building
using archived photos and
old
blueprints, this
shows
how significant history is to their culture and way of life.

In brief
, it's not the
buildings
that
are preserved
, it's the history, the stories behind those
buildings
and the
people
spent parts of their
lives
on those
buildings
, preserving all this will never happen unless there are
still
remains of their presence and those
buildings
stands as a witness and a living proof of this existence.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings? v. 7

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
283 words
6.0
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