Should a city try to preserve its old, historic building or destroy them and replace them with modern building? v.1
Should a city try to preserve its old, historic building or destroy them and replace them with modern building? v. 1
In this modern era, unemployment has become a major concern, that is gradually affecting our life, health and economy. In my opinion, I believe the growing population, global economic crisis and inadequate experience are the prime reason for not getting a job.
Firstly, there is an enormous rise in the number of citizens compared to the past. Because of it, to take India, for example, more than 60% of the people are illiterate. This has led to only highly qualified getting jobs. However, it can be controlled, to some extent, by implementing the family planning programme. Government should take initiatives in controlling the growth of population, by providing seminars and campaigns for the citizens.
Secondly, unemployment is the result of the recession. Once there is a global crisis, the companies generate less revenue. As a result, they lay off employees to cut down the cost. To cite an example, in 2009, US laid off highest percentage of employees. Nevertheless, government can encourage companies to keep their workers instead of letting them go during recessions.
Finally, only the fittest survive. Companies hire individuals, who are fit and well suitable for the position.
For instance, considering a nurse, a gap in work for more than 6 months has not been accepted in any hospitals. Because of it, one has to keep updated always in the stream they are working. An outdated person might end up being unemployed.
In conclusion, unemployment has become one among the greatest issue of the world now. I believe population growth, lack of experience and the fluctuation in the global economy are the major reasons for them. However, it can be overcome by certain initiatives taken by the government.
In this modern era, unemployment has become a major concern,
that is
gradually
affecting our life, health and economy. In my opinion, I believe the growing population, global economic crisis and inadequate experience are the prime reason for not getting a job.
Firstly
, there is an enormous rise in the number of citizens compared to the past.
Because
of it, to take India,
for example
, more than 60% of the
people
are illiterate. This has led to
only
highly
qualified getting jobs.
However
, it can
be controlled
, to
some
extent, by implementing the family planning
programme
.
Government
should take initiatives in controlling the growth of population, by providing seminars and campaigns for the citizens.
Secondly
, unemployment is the result of the recession. Once there is a global crisis, the
companies
generate less revenue.
As a result
, they lay off employees to
cut
down the cost. To cite an example, in 2009, US laid off highest percentage of employees.
Nevertheless
,
government
can encourage
companies
to
keep
their workers
instead
of letting them go during recessions.
Finally
,
only
the fittest survive.
Companies
hire individuals, who
are fit
and well suitable for the position.
For instance
, considering a nurse, a gap in work for more than 6 months has not been
accepted
in any hospitals.
Because
of it, one
has to
keep
updated always
in the stream they are working. An outdated person might
end
up
being unemployed
.
In conclusion
, unemployment has become one among the greatest issue of the world
now
. I believe population growth, lack of experience and the fluctuation in the global economy are the major reasons for them.
However
, it can
be overcome
by certain initiatives taken by the
government
.
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