Shops should not be allowed to sell food and drinks tha are scientifically proven to be bad for people's health. To what extend do you agree or disagree? v.1
Shops should not be allowed to sell food and drinks tha are scientifically proven to be bad for people's health. v. 1
In our modern society, people are more and more becoming attentive what they eat and drink in daily basis. However, I strongly believe that shops should not be permitted to provide food that are logically proved to be harmful by scientists.
To begin with, the more more injurious food is fed to humans, the more the morbidity rate will elevate. Vegetables and fruits which are used fertilisers and pesticides, for example, often cause people to suffer from cancers in their later lives if they take them continuously. Even though I acknowledge that some think that what to eat and drink is totally up to consumers decision and responsibility, I still find it unethical to keep feeding harmful food knowing that they were scientifically proved to have negative outcomes later.
Secondly, another concern to offer food which are not safe for people is ethic. Although I concede that if the shops or companies sell the products that are explained to be unsafe stopped selling the food, they will lose profits, which will bring a high unemployment rate, the issue is that no one has right to gain profits at the expense of other's health.
Finally, my strongest argument is that some people cannot make their own decision because of a lack of intimate knowledge of a healthy diet. Children, for instance, are often victims of those companies or shops that sell products with injurious additives, since they are usually too young to make a right decision, or they are not even aware of the risks. I, hence, selling products with unhealthy ingredients to pupils who do not possess appropriate information on diet is irresponsible.
In short, not only do shops that sell unhealthy food can rise a morbidity rate, they are making a profit in an inhumane way risking vulnerable people's unawareness. Therefore, I personally wholeheartedly believe that no one should sell unsafe food which are shown by scientists.
In our modern society,
people
are more and more becoming attentive what they eat and drink in daily basis.
However
, I
strongly
believe that
shops
should not
be permitted
to provide
food
that are
logically
proved to be harmful by scientists.
To
begin
with, the
more more
injurious
food
is fed
to humans, the more the morbidity rate will elevate. Vegetables and fruits which are
used
fertilisers
and pesticides,
for example
,
often
cause
people
to suffer from cancers in their later
lives
if they take them
continuously
.
Even though
I acknowledge that
some
think
that what to eat and drink is
totally
up to consumers decision and responsibility, I
still
find it unethical to
keep
feeding harmful
food
knowing that they were
scientifically
proved to have
negative
outcomes later.
Secondly
, another concern to offer
food
which are not safe for
people
is
ethic. Although I concede that if the
shops
or
companies
sell
the products that are
explained
to be unsafe
stopped
selling the
food
, they will lose profits, which will bring a high unemployment rate, the issue is that no one has right to gain profits at the expense of other's health.
Finally
, my strongest argument is that
some
people
cannot
make
their
own
decision
because
of a lack of intimate knowledge of a healthy diet. Children,
for instance
, are
often
victims of those
companies
or
shops
that
sell
products with injurious additives, since they are
usually
too young to
make
a right decision, or they are not even aware of the
risks
. I,
hence
, selling products with unhealthy ingredients to pupils who do not possess appropriate information on diet is irresponsible.
In short, not
only
do
shops
that
sell
unhealthy
food
can rise a morbidity rate, they are making a profit
in an inhumane way
risking vulnerable
people
's unawareness.
Therefore
, I
personally
wholeheartedly
believe that no one should
sell
unsafe
food
which
are shown
by scientists.
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