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Scientists predict that humans will speak the same language in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? v.3

Scientists predict that humans will speak the same language in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? v. 3
Global conversation, at the turn of 21st century, has been an enormous change. People around the world tend to study more than two languages. This trend is predicted that it will level up to higher step by using the same language communicates in modern society as a whole. Even though, some people argue that unique culture in each country would be replaced by international language. I agree with this viewpoint to what extent as in my opinion, regulating measures should be imposed to avoid degeneration of traditional characteristic. On the one hand, it is an undeniable fact that communication between different nation would be easier if every country cooperates and considerably set an official language. For instance, English is normally used in addition to flow all business or even education, including primary school, secondary school and university. Moreover, international language is a tool to enhance workforces’ knowledge which makes foreigner confidentially invested in their countries in various ways such as tourism and industry. On the one hand, unique culture would be the critical impact of inventing international language. Many local folks would not accept this due to they understand this would make them been a colony. Throughout the past, old languages were died by ignoring use and rejecting study from ancestors’ offsprings. This trend would happen again if individual languages are replaced by a standard tool. Besides disadvantages mentioned above, government should concern about incorrectly translates history standard official language in addition to misapprehension which write-in schools’ curriculum. All things considered, there are strong arguments on both sides. As far as I am concerned, culture might be entirely deleted if we use international language without consciousness about losing ancient civilization
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languages
. This trend
is predicted
that it will level up to higher step by using the same
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language
communicates in modern society as a whole.
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,
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some
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people
argue that unique culture in each country would
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international
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language
. I
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agree
with this viewpoint to what extent as in my opinion, regulating measures should
be imposed
to avoid degeneration of traditional characteristic.

On the one hand, it is an undeniable fact that communication between
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different
nation would be easier if every country cooperates and
considerably
set an official
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language
.
For instance
, English is
normally
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used
in addition
to flow all business or even education, including primary school, secondary school and university.
Moreover
,
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international
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language
is a tool to enhance
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workforces
’ knowledge which
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makes
foreigner
confidentially
invested in their countries in various ways such as tourism and industry.

On the one hand, unique culture would be the critical impact of inventing
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international
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language
.
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Many
local folks would not accept this due to they understand this would
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make
them been a colony. Throughout the past,
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old
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languages
were
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died
by ignoring
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use
and rejecting study from ancestors’
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offsprings
. This trend would happen again if individual
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languages
are replaced
by a standard tool.
Besides
disadvantages mentioned above,
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government
should concern about
incorrectly
translates history standard official
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language
in addition
to misapprehension which write-in schools’ curriculum.

All things considered, there are strong arguments on both sides. As far as I
am concerned
, culture might be
entirely
deleted if we
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use
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international
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language
without consciousness about losing ancient
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civilization
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
Learning another language is not only learning different words for the same things, but learning another way to think about things.
Flora Lewis

IELTS essay Scientists predict that humans will speak the same language in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
279 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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