I completely agree with this statement. In today’s world technologists and scientists have greater value than those who practice singing and arts. People who work with machinery have more demand today because at present we need more advancement in automation than rap. And another important field that is valued the most is medical science because of the new diseases which are occurring.
Firstly, in the modern society we need more technology related level ups. So people are giving more preference to those who are working with machinery than musicians. Whatever may be the music or tone the musicians are producing if we don’t have the automation we can’t get those tunes to the nook and corner of the world. For example in India there is a lot of awards to praise and give recognition to people who are creating and producing new gadgets, which obviously proves that people in that country give more importance to technologists than musicians.
Secondly, as years passes new disease are evolving and that creates a demand in more upgrades in medical science. This upgrade creates a mindset in people and making them to praise and profit medical scientists than artists who are creating new arts. Doctors cure people and make their life get back to the normal stage this also makes people to value scientists and doctors. For instance, in a village near Bihar there was a woman who suffered from cancer the government hospital doctor treated her without asking for any money that made the whole village to praise and value the doctor most than any other person.
To conclude, these reasons make me to completely agree with the statement. Because in today’s world we want more technological updates and scientific researches than advancements in music and the arts.
I completely
agree
with this statement. In
today
’s world technologists and scientists have greater value than those
who
practice singing and arts.
People
who
work with machinery have more demand
today
because
at present we need more advancement in automation than rap. And another
important
field that
is valued
the most is medical science
because
of the
new
diseases which are occurring.
Firstly
, in the modern society we need more technology related level ups.
So
people
are giving more preference to those
who
are working with machinery than musicians. Whatever may be the music or tone the musicians are producing if we don’t have the automation we can’t
get
those tunes to the nook and corner of the world.
For example
in India there is
a lot of
awards to praise and give recognition to
people
who
are creating and producing
new
gadgets, which
obviously
proves that
people
in that country give more importance to technologists than musicians.
Secondly
, as years passes
new
disease are evolving and that creates a demand in more upgrades in medical science. This upgrade creates a mindset in
people
and making them to praise and profit medical scientists than artists
who
are creating
new
arts.
Doctors
cure
people
and
make
their life
get
back to the normal stage this
also
makes
people
to value scientists and
doctors
.
For instance
, in a village near Bihar there was a woman
who
suffered from cancer the
government
hospital
doctor
treated her without asking for any money that made the whole village to praise and value the
doctor
most
than any other person.
To conclude
, these reasons
make
me to completely
agree
with the statement.
Because
in
today
’s world we want more technological updates and scientific researches than advancements in music and the arts.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes