It is irrefutable that the juveniles feel delightful on receiving gifts. While some believe that it's best to give some money as a present to them, I agree with the people who think that it is a bad idea.
Some elderly people, who find it difficult to choose something relevant for the new generation, prefer giving cash as this simply saves their time to think about a prefect gift. Furthermore, some people also think that their taste would not be appreciated by young people. For instance, grandparents generally prefer giving money to their grandchildren as a present because they hesitate that their choice of things would not be the preference of today's generation. Hence, they try to play safe.
However, I strongly believe that children should be given proper gifts rather than cash as it helps to develop a respect for all kinds of thing and people who have put an effort and time to choose something for them. Additionally, any child can misuse the money, such as they can spend it on drugs and cigarettes without the knowledge of their parents. Conversely, other forms of gifts can be supervised by their parents and they can decide whether it should be given to them or not. For example, a child given a play station as a gift during the exam week can be delayed for a few days as his parents can supervise it.
In conclusion, although some people think that the best thing that could be given to young people as a gift is cash as this does not require a lot of effort to put into while choosing a present and it also lowers the risk of the gift being disliked by them. But, I believe that it is not a good idea to give them loose money and they should be given proper gifts instead for the above mentioned reasons.
It is irrefutable that the juveniles feel delightful on receiving
gifts
. While
some
believe that it's best to give
some
money
as a present to them, I
agree
with the
people
who
think
that it is a
bad
idea
.
Some
elderly
people
, who find it difficult to choose something relevant for the new generation, prefer giving cash as this
simply
saves their time to
think
about a prefect
gift
.
Furthermore
,
some
people
also
think
that their taste would not
be appreciated
by young
people
.
For instance
, grandparents
generally
prefer giving
money
to their grandchildren as a present
because
they hesitate that their choice of things would not be the preference of
today
's generation.
Hence
, they try to play safe.
However
, I
strongly
believe that children should be
given
proper
gifts
rather
than cash as it
helps
to develop a respect for all kinds of thing and
people
who have put an effort and time to choose something for them.
Additionally
, any child can misuse the
money
, such as they can spend it on drugs and cigarettes without the knowledge of their parents.
Conversely
, other forms of
gifts
can
be supervised
by their
parents and
they can decide whether it should be
given
to them or not.
For example
, a child
given
a play station as a
gift
during the exam week can
be delayed
for a few days as his parents can supervise it.
In conclusion
, although
some
people
think
that the best thing that could be
given
to young
people
as a
gift
is cash as this does not require
a lot of
effort to put into while choosing a present and it
also
lowers the
risk
of the
gift
being disliked
by them.
But
, I believe that it is not a
good
idea
to give them loose
money and
they should be
given
proper
gifts
instead
for the above mentioned reasons.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes