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Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.1

Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 1
Nowadays, the increasing of school implements appraisal system from students to teachers, and this has been a debatable issue whether evealuating teacher is reasonable or not. While some people argue that teachers are people who educate children so they do not have to be evaluated, I contend that evaluating them must exert various progressive impacts on kids for following two rationates The first compelling reason as to why I am supportive of appraisal is that this must have beneficial influence on pupils' growth. To be spesific, evaluating system will cover the most fragile part of the teacher and also uses for comunitation, by which i mean that children could design learning atmosphere of they prefer. For example, at the university, if professer tell the story which is out of the major and waste study time, students could take action by using these system. Even though this might make professer depressed, school should implement this system for all students The another reason that i find is that this system could prevent the worst case. To begin with the instructors are reason for being to have significant belief from pupils and parents so they exert enormous influence on their pupils. To put it simply, teacher could lead pupils in a negative way, which bring about deteriorate situatioin. For instance, if teacher have aggresive mindset and undesirable atitude, students will follow how instructor act and how teacher think. Therefore, to avoid this negative phenomenon teacher should be evaluated by pupils who in a formative period which could decide their future and parents who foster those children. In conclusion, regarding the issue of appraisal system, I believe that this is essential for school to cultivate their students to be a decent adult based on several rationales mentioned above.
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argue that
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who educate children
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they do not
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, I contend that evaluating them
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exert various progressive impacts on kids for following two
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compelling reason as to why I am supportive of appraisal is that this
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have beneficial influence on pupils' growth. To be
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spesific
, evaluating
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will cover the most fragile part of the
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and
also
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for
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mean that children could design learning atmosphere of they prefer.
For example
, at the university, if
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professer
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tell
the story which is out of the major and waste study time,
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students
could take action by using these
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system
.
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this might
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professer
depressed, school should implement this
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for all
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students


The another reason that
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i
find is that this
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could
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the worst case. To
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with the instructors are reason for being to have significant belief from
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pupils
and parents
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so
they exert enormous influence on their
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pupils
. To put it
simply
,
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teacher
could lead
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pupils
in a
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negative
way, which bring about deteriorate
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situatioin
.
For instance
, if
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have
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aggresive
mindset and undesirable
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atitude
,
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students
will follow how instructor act and how
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teacher
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think
.
Therefore
, to avoid this
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should
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who in a formative period which could decide their future and parents who foster those children.

In conclusion
, regarding the issue of appraisal
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system
, I believe that this is essential for school to cultivate their
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students
to be a decent adult based on several rationales mentioned above.
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IELTS essay Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
294 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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