The proper curriculum for schools has become a matter of great concern as it directly influences the quality of education. Some people opine that academies should focus on job-oriented subjects that prepare pupils for a good career whereas others think that learners should be cognizant of their ancient path, tradition and heritage through learning arts and history besides their career preparation. This essay argues why it is necessary to emphasise on traditional subjects, which are just as important as employment-oriented skills.
Many schools primarily concentrate on subjects that help students improve their skills and get ready for jobs. This is mainly due to the present competitive world where each one is struggling to be better than the other. So people assume that developing practical skills from a younger age will help students perform well in professional life. For instance, some schools in India have adopted certain subjects that focus mainly on attaining a medical degree and thereby become a better physician in the future.
However, it is essential for students to learn history, arts and similar subjects along with the skill-oriented materials. Knowledge of culture and history allows student become leaders than becoming corporate robots. For instance, the contribution of an explorer, leader and social worker is no less than that of a doctor or an engineer.
In conclusion, the primary objective of education is to prepare the young generation to build a better world through their diverse contributions, not just become money-making machines. This is why arts and history are as important as skill-related subjects are in the national education curriculum.
The proper curriculum for schools has
become
a matter of great concern as it
directly
influences the quality of education.
Some
people
opine that academies should focus on job-oriented
subjects
that prepare pupils for a
good
career whereas others
think
that learners should be cognizant of their ancient path, tradition and heritage through learning arts and
history
besides
their career preparation. This essay argues why it is necessary to
emphasise
on traditional
subjects
, which are
just
as
important
as employment-oriented
skills
.
Many
schools
primarily
concentrate on
subjects
that
help
students
improve
their
skills
and
get
ready for jobs. This is
mainly
due to the present competitive world where each one is struggling to be better than the other.
So
people
assume that developing practical
skills
from a younger age will
help
students
perform well in professional life.
For instance
,
some
schools in India have adopted certain
subjects
that focus
mainly
on attaining a medical degree and thereby
become
a better physician in the future.
However
, it is essential for
students
to learn
history
, arts and similar
subjects
along with the
skill
-oriented materials. Knowledge of culture and
history
allows
student
become
leaders than becoming corporate robots.
For instance
, the contribution of an explorer, leader and social worker is no less than that of a doctor or an engineer.
In conclusion
, the primary objective of education is to prepare the young generation to build a better world through their diverse contributions, not
just
become
money-making machines. This is why arts and
history
are as
important
as
skill
-related
subjects
are in the national education curriculum.
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