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school work and get a decent night's sleep if you happen to be living in the family home. I can recall a friend from my university days who lived in a share house with other students. Life was a party for him but he didn't eat or study well and v.1

school work and get a decent night's sleep if you happen to be living in the family home. I can recall a friend from my university days who lived in a share house with other students. Life was a party for him but he didn't eat or study well and v. 1
Nowadays, communication is increasing online by enabling a lot of users in the international. For many people, the internet is cutting down environmentally obstruction that would commonly never have the chance to meet. However, there are both pros and cons to decide to do this. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why people want to communicate and some of the challenges to be overcome. Let's begin by looking at the advantages to get knowledge and skills that improve on the website. Students are spending most of the time in browsers to different sites that give push up the career like jobs for getting more chances in life. To illustrate, Andhra Pradesh is an important city in India, so colleges want to show for using browsers a long time of interest. Class times take laptop a certain period to get professional life. Turning to the other side of the argument, web servers are crashing to damage signals for communicating various meetings to interact with people. For example, People are using Facebook, Twitter, Telegram, etc. These are plenty of apps for talking to another conversation without directly touching a person. The main problem occurs power off or shut down of the system that depends on the situation. All things considered, communication of the international online with others to breaking down the environment of the peoples. You need to weigh up to pros of the information and skills for enabling people, and cons of crash signals for a long time.
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many
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people
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meet
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some of the
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people
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some of the
challenges to
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get
knowledge and
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skills
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improve
on the website. Students are spending most of the
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time
in browsers to
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different
sites that give push up the career like jobs for getting more chances in life. To illustrate, Andhra Pradesh is an
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important
city in India,
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so
colleges want to
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show
for using browsers a long
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time
of interest.
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Class
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times
take laptop a certain period to
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get
professional life.

Turning to the other side of the argument, web servers are crashing to damage signals for communicating various meetings to interact with
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people
.
For example
,
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People
are using Facebook, Twitter, Telegram, etc. These are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plenty
of apps for talking to another conversation without
directly
touching a person. The main problem occurs power off or shut down of the system that depends on the situation.

All things considered, communication of the international online with others to breaking down the environment of the
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peoples
. You need to weigh up to pros of the information and
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skills
for enabling
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people
, and cons of crash signals for a long
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time
.
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IELTS essay school work and get a decent night's sleep if you happen to be living in the family home. I can recall a friend from my university days who lived in a share house with other students. Life was a party for him but he didn't eat or study well and v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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