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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is impossible to always be honest with your friends. v.167

It is impossible to always be honest with your friends. v. 167
There is no doubt that technology changed perspective about social connectivity of people in the world. There are few people who believe that social networking sites are playing an important role to make people more social whereas others think it in a negative way. In this essay, I will elaborate both the views and provide my opinion. On the one hand, people used to meet and greet each other only on the social events. As a result, the only way to talk and get to know another person is by meeting with those events only. For example, family members can only socialize while having family functions such as marriage, engagement, party, etc. This could be the only possible way to make their relation to another level. On the other hand, when technology developed social networking websites to connect people, it became easier for humans to connect each other and know each other. This is because they can search anybody around the world and connect. If the other person gives permission to chat, they could become friends. For instance, Picasa is also another application where people can share their beautiful memories in the form of media like photos and videos. In my opinion, I would appreciate those software developers who developed such networking applications. In this era, this is the best invention that helped people to know each other and their cultures. I strongly recommend my family and friends to use such kind of applications.
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perspective about
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connectivity of
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people
in the world. There are few
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people
who believe that
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social
networking sites are playing an
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important
role to
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make
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people
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social
whereas others
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think
it in a
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negative
way. In this essay, I will elaborate both the views and provide my opinion.

On the one hand,
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people
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used
to
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meet
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other
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on the
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social
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events
.
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, the
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only
way to talk and
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get
to know another person is by meeting with those
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events
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only
.
For example
, family members can
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only
socialize while having family functions such as marriage, engagement, party, etc. This could be the
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only
possible way to
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make
their relation to another level.

On the
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other
hand, when technology developed
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social
networking websites to connect
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people
, it became easier for humans to connect each
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other
and know each
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other
. This is
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because
they can search anybody around the world and connect. If the
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other
person gives permission to chat, they could become friends.
For instance
,
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also
another application where
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people
can share their
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beautiful
memories in the form of media like photos and videos.

In my opinion, I would appreciate those software developers who developed such networking applications. In this era, this is the best invention that
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helped
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people
to know each
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other
and their cultures. I
strongly
recommend my family and friends to
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use
such kind of applications.
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IELTS essay It is impossible to always be honest with your friends. v. 167

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
244 words
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7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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