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Safety standards are important when building people's homes. Who should be responsible for enforcing strict building codes - the government or the people who build the houses. v.3

Safety standards are important when building people's homes. Who should be responsible for enforcing strict building codes - the government or the people who build the houses. v. 3
There are many accidents claim thousands of lives related to a miscalculation in house construction in many countries. These accidents happen since there are no explicit rules of determining whose obligation is to impose construction safety standards; however, it has to be the government' s commitment as it has necessary resources and power. The government can enforce building codes in person of insurance companies. In many developed countries it is mandatory to insure properties, and in the event of damage to houses agencies compensate it. Consequently, to prevent the damage, happens mostly due to poor building standards, the government or its representatives should control the process of building since the beginning. Modern houses in Kazakhstan, for instance, are less likely to experience accidents due to the fact that the government monitors each building on safety standards by sending an inspector. This means of the enforcement, nevertheless, can be costly since the government has to employ a significant number of inspectors; this figure might be much more in countries where there is a building boom. The safety standards can be enforced by the law. There is a criminal responsibility for violation the standards in many countries. This is more efficient in terms of resources as the owners become responsible for both properties and criminal records. Canada, for example, sentences those who have failed to conduct proper safety standards while building the houses for a long time and fines a substantial amount of money. Thus, the method can be both effective and efficient as the government' s expenditure decreases on the inspectors, whereas, its income rises by fines. Safety standards in building houses are vital. Thus, it is significant that the government be responsible for enforcing the standards since it is likely to be the only copable institute.
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accidents claim thousands of
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lives
related to a miscalculation in
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house
construction in
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many
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countries
. These accidents happen since there are no explicit
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rules
of determining whose obligation is to impose construction
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safety
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standards
;
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, it
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has to
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government&
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government
can enforce
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building
codes in person of insurance
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companies
. In
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many
developed
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countries
it is mandatory to insure properties, and in the
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event
of damage to
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houses
agencies compensate it.
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prevent
the damage, happens
mostly
due to poor
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building
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standards
, the
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government
or its representatives should control the process of
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building
since the beginning. Modern
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houses
in Kazakhstan,
for instance
, are less likely to experience accidents due to the fact that the
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government
monitors each
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building
on
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safety
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standards
by sending an inspector. This means of the enforcement,
nevertheless
, can be costly since the
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government
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has to
employ a significant number of inspectors; this figure might be much more in
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countries
where there is a
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building
boom.

The
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safety
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standards
can
be enforced
by the law. There is a criminal responsibility for violation the
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standards
in
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many
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countries
. This is more efficient in terms of resources as the owners become responsible for both properties and criminal records. Canada,
for example
, sentences those who have failed to conduct proper
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safety
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standards
while
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building
the
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houses
for a long time and fines a substantial amount of money.
Thus
, the method can be both effective and efficient as the
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government&
#039; s expenditure decreases on the inspectors, whereas, its income rises by fines.

Safety
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standards
in
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building
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houses
are vital.
Thus
, it is significant that the
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government
be responsible for enforcing the
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standards
since it is likely to be the
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only
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copable
institute.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
35Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Safety standards are important when building people's homes. Who should be responsible for enforcing strict building codes - the government or the people who build the houses. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
296 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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