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It is generally believed that the Internet it is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. v.2

It is generally believed that the Internet it is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. v. 2
Nowadays, although the Internet is broadly considered as an extremely useful medium to communicate, there are some people who don’t agree with this viewpoint. In my opinion, the Internet is by far the best way to share and to look for information. Generally speaking, the Internet provides quick access to precise information on practically all issues by just keying in some words on Google with our devices. Moreover, the most known newspaper companies or information agencies have their own website so that users can find the most recent news and follow its evolution. In addition, the Internet proved to be a revolutionary resource in sharing knowledge for researchers, who can now make use of an up-to-date, highly valuable database of projects and data, in place of limited and antiquated books, which can potentially be read online as well. On the other hand, since the Internet is free and everyone can join in it, there is no proof that every information is accurate and trustable. There are a lot of blogs, websites where individuals post their judgments or share data without any supervision by experts or without undergoing any editorial process. If not everything that can be found online can be trusted, it is natural that some people may tend to gather information reading manuals, watching documentaries and going to lectures. In the end, I think the Internet overwhelms every other mean of communication: firstly because it is easy to use, and secondly, for the immense volume of data accessible on the platform. Consequently, if something seems fake or made up, there are plenty of online sources only some clicks away with which to verify it.
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broadly
considered as an
extremely
useful medium to communicate, there are
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people
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agree
with this viewpoint. In my opinion, the Internet is by far the best way to share and to look for information.

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speaking, the Internet provides quick access to precise
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information
on
practically
all issues by
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just
keying in
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some
words on Google with our devices.
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, the most known newspaper
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companies
or
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information
agencies have their
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own
website
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so
that users can find the most recent news and follow its evolution.
In addition
, the Internet proved to be a revolutionary resource in sharing knowledge for researchers, who can
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now
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make
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use
of an up-to-date,
highly
valuable database of projects and data, in place of limited and antiquated books, which can
potentially
be read
online
as well
.

On the other hand
, since the Internet is free and everyone can
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join
in it, there is no proof that every
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information
is accurate and trustable. There are
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a lot of
blogs, websites where individuals post their judgments or share data without any supervision by experts or without undergoing any editorial process. If not everything that can
be found
online can
be trusted
, it is natural that
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some
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people
may tend to gather
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information
reading manuals, watching documentaries and going to lectures.

In the
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end
, I
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think
the Internet overwhelms every other mean of communication:
firstly
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because
it is easy to
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use
, and
secondly
, for the immense volume of data accessible on the platform.
Consequently
, if something seems fake or made up, there are
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plenty
of online sources
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only
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some
clicks away with which to verify it.
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IELTS essay It is generally believed that the Internet it is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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