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Maintaining safety standard while building homes is very important and some people believe that government should be responsible for enforcing the strict building codes while many others opine that house owners and the people who are working there should be responsible for that. In your opinion who should be responsible for enforcing strict building codes. v.3

Maintaining safety standard while building homes is very important and some people believe that government should be responsible for enforcing the strict building codes while many others opine that house owners and the people who are working there should be responsible for that. In your opinion who should be responsible for enforcing strict building codes. v. 3
The strength of a house lies in its base so when constructing a house, it is essential to consider all necessary measures required for its security. This can be achieved with the implementation of proper building strategies upon which the government should keep a check. In order to make construction plans stronger, the government should first design building ethics that ensure effective construction of homes. The government takes work from people in the form of contractors, labours and material dealers, but ultimately the central regulating body is the government that can keep a check and balance. It is their duty to make sure that high-quality construction material is used, the architectural layout is legal and the labour is professionally skilled. Places where land favours outbreaks of the earthquake such as Japan, their government has announced earthquake proof building plans to avoid hazards. Let us take an example of the UK, where houses are made of wood for people’s comfort because the UK has cold weather so wooden houses provide better insulation than cemented houses. British government ensures that this building ethic is applied. Building and housing systems where an electric security system is incorporated, fewer incidents of burglary and stealing take place. Just as the government brings these systems into action in their state buildings such as banks and minister houses, they should consider these facts while passing local residential house maps. People who build the homes will automatically come under state’s eye if strict codes will come into action. People who do fraud, disciplinary action should be taken against them. Places, where people escape such illegal acts, end up at the cost of the life of people. Hence, it is the foremost duty of the ruling government to make and apply building codes countrywide. They rule the state so they are the main caretakers of local residents.
The strength of a
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lies in its base
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so
when constructing a
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house
, it is essential to consider all necessary measures required for its security. This can
be achieved
with the implementation of proper
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building
strategies upon which the
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government
should
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keep
a
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check
.

In order to
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make
construction plans stronger, the
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government
should
first
design
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building
ethics that ensure effective construction of homes. The
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government
takes work from
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people
in the form of contractors,
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labours
and material dealers,
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but
ultimately
the central regulating body is the
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government
that can
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keep
a
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check
and balance. It is their duty to
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make
sure that high-quality construction material is
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used
, the architectural layout is legal and the
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labour
is
professionally
skilled. Places where land
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favours
outbreaks of the earthquake such as Japan, their
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government
has announced earthquake proof
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building
plans to avoid hazards.
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Let
us take an example of the UK, where
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houses
are made
of wood for
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people’s
comfort
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because
the UK has
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cold
weather
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so
wooden
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houses
provide better insulation than cemented
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houses
. British
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government
ensures that this
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building
ethic
is applied
.

Building and housing systems where an electric security system
is incorporated
, fewer incidents of burglary and stealing take place.
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Just
as the
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government
brings these systems into action in their state
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buildings
such as banks and minister
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houses
, they should consider these facts while passing local residential
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house
maps.
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People
who build the homes will
automatically
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come
under state’s eye if strict codes will
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come
into action.
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People
who do fraud, disciplinary action should
be taken
against them. Places, where
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people
escape such illegal acts,
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end
up at the cost of the life of
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people
.

Hence
, it is the foremost duty of the ruling
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government
to
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make
and apply
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building
codes countrywide. They
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rule
the state
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so
they are the main caretakers of local residents.
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IELTS essay Maintaining safety standard while building homes is very important and some people believe that government should be responsible for enforcing the strict building codes while many others opine that house owners and the people who are working there should be responsible for that. In your opinion who should be responsible for enforcing strict building codes. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
308 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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