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Reading for pleasure can develop imagination and language skills better than watching TV. Do you agree or disagree? v.3

Reading and watching are always best option for one who really wants to gain some knowledges and skills. However, is has argued that, by reading one can be enhanced his visualizing power and can be learnt language better than watching tv. This essay agree with this discussion for its some valuable benefits. This essay will firstly discuss about two advantages and then discuss about the reason why this essay agrees with the statement. Reading books has tremendous advantages. By reading books one be learnt vocabularies, sentence constructions and presentation of any languages. Moreover, there is a scope of learning idea generation by reading books. For instance, talking to past scientists and novel mans, who were used to read books and almost them were multilingual person. In addition to, imagination power has developed in unconditionally bye reading. The story plots of books forced one to visualize the scenario and look back to that plot. Though it is always required to choose good writers books. There are a lot of example who love to read books just because they love to imagine. For instance, if anyone read books, he or she might get pleasure as well as increase imagination power that is almost impossible by watching tv. In conclusion, both reading and watching tv gives someone pleasure bt if someone wants to develop his or her skills, he or she should choose reading rather than watching tv
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and watching are
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option for one who
really
wants to gain
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some
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knowledges
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skills
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However
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reading
one can
be enhanced
his visualizing power and can be
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learnt
language better than watching
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tv
. This essay
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agree
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some
valuable benefits. This essay will
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discuss about two
advantages and then
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discuss about the
reason why this essay
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agrees
with the statement.

Reading
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books
has tremendous advantages. By
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reading
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books
one be
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vocabularies, sentence constructions and presentation of any languages.
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idea
generation by
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reading
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books
.
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, talking to past scientists and novel mans, who were
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used
to read
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books
and almost them
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were multilingual
person.

In addition
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unconditionally
bye
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reading
. The story plots of
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books
forced one to visualize the scenario and look back to that plot.
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good
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. There are
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love
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books
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because
they
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, if anyone read
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books
, he or she might
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get
pleasure
as well
as increase imagination power
that is
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tv
.

In conclusion
, both
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and watching
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tv
gives someone pleasure
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if someone wants to develop
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his or her
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skills
, he or she should choose
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reading
rather
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Learning another language is not only learning different words for the same things, but learning another way to think about things.
Flora Lewis

IELTS essay It has been said that reading for pleasure is better in developing imagination and language skills than watching tv.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
234 words
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