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The media news agencies should must include publish stories which report positive reports good news do you agree or disagree. v.1

The media news agencies should must include publish stories which report positive reports good news v. 1
These days, Media is vital to share information among the public. The news agencies are including publicity of the stories that are giving the good news of the report. But what is the most effective method for dealing with the positives of a better newscast? In this essay, I will agree to support my opinion with examples. First of all, the news is adding better information about the society that jobs were doing in the company to get the best results. There are able going on the sincerity, So agencies were following as per rules without any behaviour. For example, one of the best channels in my area like 99tv. This channel wants to see everyone also is being self respective among the social events. Knowledge is given to the people for various persons that are able Skilling for this sector. Secondly, some press release is followed to be fake, but there will be producing wrong statements. There wants to do crime in the community that why headlines implement too attractive for people. For instance, the TV9 channel is the best rating in the first staring itself after slowing down their investments. Politics members are buying of a variety of communication, but society is facing a big problem. In a nutshell, although it is a common belief that adding the story of the report that media news agencies. I believe that share the information to give good results. I thinking not to be trusted while their releasing of headlines people.
These days, Media is vital to share information among the public. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
agencies are including publicity of the stories that are giving the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
of the report.
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But
what is the most effective method for dealing with the positives of a better newscast? In this essay, I will
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agree
to support my opinion with examples.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
is adding better information about the society that jobs were doing in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the best results. There are able going on the sincerity,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
agencies were following as per
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
without any
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behaviour
.
For example
, one of the best channels in my area like 99tv. This channel wants to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
everyone
also
is being self respective among the social
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
. Knowledge is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
for various persons that are able
Possible spelling mistake found.
Skilling
for this sector.

Secondly
,
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some
press release
is followed
to be fake,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
there will be producing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
statements. There wants to do crime in the community that why headlines implement too attractive for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.
For instance
, the TV9 channel is the best rating in the
first
staring itself after slowing down their investments. Politics members are buying of a variety of communication,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
society is facing a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
problem.

In a nutshell, although it is a common belief that adding the story of the report that media
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
agencies. I believe that share the information to give
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
results.
Did you mean "I'm thinking", "I am thinking", or "I was thinking"?
I thinking
not to
be trusted
while their releasing of headlines
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay The media news agencies should must include publish stories which report positive reports good news v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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