Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.11

Question: It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 11
There has been a difference of opinion regarding the belief that equal quantities of students of each gender should be included in every course of universities. In my opinion, I disagree with this view First of all, having policies to encourage the same number of men and women in every subject is simply unrealistic. In this way, if a university decided to regulate programs with the same number of genders it would create huge problems. In reality, there are several inclinations in courses and some of them are more popular among females or males, and it would not be practical to aim for identical proportions. For example, nursing is a career almost chosen by women, and without enough males` applications would be impossible to fill the empty spaces. Indeed, this same issue can be extended to similar situations causing delay and discontent between pupils. Apart from the practical concerns mentioned above, I also believe that it would be unfair to base admission to higher education courses on the sexes. Universities should continue selecting the best candidates according to their qualifications. In fact, both men and female have the same capacity and abilities to achieve any position, the only difference should be the number of hours spent in their preparation. Indeed, the persistence and hard work should be the determinant factors to achieve good grades and positions, and not the limitation and rejection in favour of other gender with fewer qualifications. By way of conclusion, I believe that it would be both impractical and unfair to change to a selection procedure based on gender.
There has been a difference of opinion regarding the belief that equal quantities of students of each gender should
be included
in every course of universities. In my opinion, I disagree with this
view


First of all
, having policies to encourage the same number of
men
and women in every subject is
simply
unrealistic. In this way, if a university decided to regulate programs with the same number of genders it would create huge problems. In reality, there are several inclinations in courses and
some
of them are more popular among females or males, and it would not be practical to aim for identical proportions.
For example
, nursing is a career almost chosen by women, and without
enough
males` applications would be impossible to fill the empty spaces.
Indeed
, this same issue can
be extended
to similar situations causing delay and discontent between pupils.

Apart from the practical concerns mentioned above, I
also
believe that it would be unfair to base admission to higher education courses on the sexes. Universities should continue selecting the best candidates according to their qualifications. In fact, both
men
and female have the same capacity and abilities to achieve any position, the
only
difference should be the number of hours spent in their preparation.
Indeed
, the persistence and
hard
work should be the determinant factors to achieve
good
grades and positions, and not the limitation and rejection in
favour
of other gender with fewer qualifications.

By way of conclusion, I believe that it would be both impractical and unfair to
change
to a selection procedure based on gender.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Question: It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 11

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts