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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is positive or negative development ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Question: Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? v. 3

Nations are turning out to be increasingly more comparative since individuals can purchase the same things from anyplace on the planet. I think one can say that it is positive or negative development on the basis of form which angle they are watching. This is will intend to provide the clear view form both side positive as well as negative also. Due to modernization in technology individuals are able to manufacture same products which originally belong to other country or continent on the globe. Considering one scenario if individual have to migrate to another country for some critical reasons then they can not able to acclimatize with country’s number of traits such as food, life style, climate etc. It is beneficial to them if the things they had used to be in their own country are available in this country in which they shifted. For example, if any wagon persons are going to any non-wagon country then they might be face some kind of difficulties related to feeding sources. Consequently, it can be seen as positive development from the one hand. Furthermore, it is also soaring demand of tourism if tourists find the satisfactory things easily on tour. So that, it also gives assistance to country’s economical growth by foreign exchange. Because of tourism one nation also able to present their culture among the other people, subsequently, it may lead to social growth of particular country. Moreover, nowadays, people are willing to go in other countries for the specific reasons such as for business purpose, for academic reasons, for finding mental peace and many more. On the other hand, it may be possible to lose their monopoly of the products or anything that related to their culture. It may happen in some cases that one can learn the manufacturing process and start producing their own products. Subsequently, it can also be seen as disadvantageous through financial point of view. In conclusion, I think it can be seen as positive development for both economic and social outgrowth of particular country by neglecting their few demerits.

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 more comparative since individuals can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 the same things from anyplace on the planet. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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positive
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negative
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clear
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positive
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as well as
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negative
also
.

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other
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country
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have to
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country
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some
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country’s
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used
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own
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country
 are available in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
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country
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face
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some
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, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
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positive
 development from the one hand.

Furthermore
, it is also
 soaring demand of tourism if tourists find the satisfactory things easily
 on tour. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 that, it also
 gives assistance to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country’s
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economical
 growth by foreign exchange. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 of tourism one nation also
 able to present their culture among the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
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people
, subsequently
, it may lead to social growth of particular You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
. Moreover
, nowadays, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are willing to go in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
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countries
 for the specific reasons such as for business purpose, for academic reasons, for finding mental peace and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 more.

On the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 hand, it may be possible to lose their monopoly of the products or anything that related to their culture. It may happen in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 cases that one can learn the manufacturing process and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
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own
 products. Subsequently
, it can also
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seen
 as disadvantageous through financial point of view.

In conclusion
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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seen
 as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspecificconfidentdecisiveclearconclusive
positive
 development for both economic and social outgrowth of particular You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 by neglecting their few demerits. 