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Question 5: Describe the woman’s problem and the two suggestions the man makes about how she could deal with it. What do you think the woman should do and why? v.1

Question 5: Describe the woman’s problem and the two suggestions the man makes about how she could deal with it. What do you think the woman should do and why? v. 1
It is a common belief that when children's foreign language education starts at primary school, they are becoming more talented compared to kids who are not educated with a second language. In terms of benefits are more than disadvantages. This essay will briefly explain this supporting by positive sides. In the modern life, many parents want to learn a foreign language their pupils in their early growth. Thus, most schools' schedule contains a second language course besides mother tongue. The kid who started to be a bilingual person, she or he will be successful in every area of the growth. Due to, their conscious enable to connect with a larger perspective, thus they would be prevailed of anything on the contrary to one lingual ones. For example, a survey explains the individual who learnt a foreign language have more skill about maths, physics and life science. That is to say, to start study a language during the childhood, its benefits are amazing in order to develop all intelligence. On the other hand, some people can consider about the kids should start to second language at the secondary school. However, many authorities say how much time earlier they kick off education, they would be more knowledge about their courses, particular language skills should be given in the primary school. In our digital age, many parents have a special aim in order to improve their children's connection with a foreign language. For instance, many brands announce their online speaking course will be occurred for only 7-12 age groups. Admittedly, we need to speak and writing with the universal language in our getting small business world. Thus, the person who has these skills are more capable, not only in the professional area, also in the social life. In conclusion, the benefits outweigh than drawbacks to study with a foreign language in the primary school. These kids can handle with their issues because of thinking with a larger perspective. In the future, all schools should open an access to language learning hub for the students.
It is a common belief that when children's
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language
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, they are becoming more talented compared to
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kids
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who
are not educated with a second
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language
. In terms of benefits are more than disadvantages. This essay will
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explain
this supporting by
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positive
sides.

In the modern life,
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many
parents want to learn a
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foreign
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language
their pupils in their early growth.
Thus
, most schools' schedule contains a second
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language
course
besides
mother tongue. The
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kid
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who
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started
to be a bilingual person, she or he will be successful in every area of the growth. Due to, their conscious enable to connect with a larger perspective,
thus
they would
be prevailed
of anything
on the contrary
to one lingual ones.
For example
, a survey
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explains
the individual
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who
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learnt
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foreign
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language
have more
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skill
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, physics and life science.
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to say, to
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study a
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during the childhood, its benefits are amazing in order to develop all intelligence.

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consider about the
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kids
should
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start
to second
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language
at the secondary
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school
.
However
,
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many
authorities say how much time earlier they kick off education, they would be more knowledge about their courses, particular
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language
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skills
should be
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given
in the primary
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school
. In our digital age,
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many
parents have a special aim in order to
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improve
their children's connection with a
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foreign
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language
.
For instance
,
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many
brands announce their online speaking course will
be occurred
for
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only
7-12 age groups.
Admittedly
, we need to speak and writing with the universal
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language
in our getting
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small
business world.
Thus
, the person
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who
has these
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skills
are more capable, not
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only
in the professional area,
also
in the social life.

In conclusion
, the benefits outweigh than drawbacks to study with a
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foreign
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language
in the primary
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school
. These
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kids
can handle with their issues
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because
of thinking with a larger perspective. In the future, all
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schools
should open
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an access
to
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language
learning hub for the students.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Question 5: Describe the woman’s problem and the two suggestions the man makes about how she could deal with it. What do you think the woman should do and why? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
341 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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