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Question 3: 60 secondsThe university plans to discontinue its orientation program. Instead it will provide two choices for freshman students. The woman agrees with the plan and provides two good reasons to support her opinion. v.1

Question 3: 60 secondsThe university plans to discontinue its orientation program. Instead it will provide two choices for freshman students. The woman agrees with the plan and provides two good reasons to support her opinion. v. 1
Animal experimentation has been a debated issue for many decades. It is true that medicines and other daily products are tested on animals before they are cleared for human use. However, it is often suggested that medical experiments should not conduct on animals. I agree with statement yet some conservative swing in the opposite direction. I will elaborate my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs. To embark upon, the most convincing argument in the favour of this claim is animals also have rights. Needless to say, just like humans, animals also have their rights. Animal testing does not mean it is 100% safe for human then why animals are often killed for testing as well as they are frequently suffering from extreme pain. Moreover, the benefits to humans do not justify the suffering caused and the scientist should use alternative methods for research. On the other hand, there is no other alternative to check the effectiveness of drugs and human life is more precious than animals that are why no country allows to direct test on the humanity. In addition, it is reasonable to put life of some animals at risk to save lives of the masses. In conclusion, I am of the opinion, on balance, that the benefits do not outweigh the disadvantages, and testing on animals should not continue. Although it may improve the lives of humans, it is not fair that animals should suffer in order to achieve this.
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Animal
experimentation has been a debated issue for
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many
decades. It is true that medicines and other daily products are
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tested
on
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animals
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before
they
are cleared
for
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human
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use
.
However
, it is
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often
suggested that medical experiments should not conduct on
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animals
. I
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agree
with statement
yet
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some
conservative swing in the opposite direction. I will elaborate my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.

To embark upon, the most convincing argument in the
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favour
of this claim is
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animals
also
have rights. Needless to say,
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just
like
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humans
,
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animals
also
have their rights.
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Animal
testing does not mean it is 100% safe for
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human
then why
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animals
are
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often
killed for testing
as well
as they are
frequently
suffering from extreme pain.
Moreover
, the benefits to
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humans
do not justify the suffering caused and the scientist should
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use
alternative methods for research.

On the other hand
, there is no other alternative to
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check
the effectiveness of drugs and
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human
life is more precious than
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animals
that are why no country
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allows
to direct
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test
on the humanity.
In addition
, it is reasonable to put life of
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some
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animals
at
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risk
to save
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lives
of the masses.

In conclusion
, I am of the opinion, on balance, that the benefits do not outweigh the disadvantages, and testing on
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animals
should not continue. Although it may
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improve
the
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lives
of
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humans
, it is not
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fair
that
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animals
should suffer in order to achieve this.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Question 3: 60 secondsThe university plans to discontinue its orientation program. Instead it will provide two choices for freshman students. The woman agrees with the plan and provides two good reasons to support her opinion. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
241 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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