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Question 1What do you miss most about your home when you are away? Use specific details in your explanation. v.1

Question 1What do you miss most about your home when you are away? Use specific details in your explanation. v. 1
NOWADAYS SOCIAL MEDIA HAS BECOME A VITAL TOOL FOR VARIOUS USES IN EVERYBODY'S LIFE. FOR SIGINING UP SOCIAL MEDIA ACCOUNT, ONE NEEDS TO ADDRESS NUMERIOUS PERSONAL DETAILS SUCH AS CONTACT NUMBER, BERTH DETAILS AND SO ON. AS PER THIS ESSAY, IT IS NOT SAFE TO PROVIDE ALL THE PRIVATE INFORMATION ON SOCIAL MEDIA AS IT MIGHT BE LIFE THRETINING, THUS, DEMERITS CAN NEVER BE NEGLETED. ON THE ONE HAND, THE PRIME ADVANTAGE OF THE SOCIAL MEDIA IS THAT IT HAS ABILITY TO CONNECT PEOPLE TO EACHOTHER AROUND THE WORLD ESPECIALLY FOR BUSINESS PEOPLE. BUSINESSMEN CAN EXAPAND THEIR BUSINESS INTERNATIONALLY AND EARN MORE PROFITS, WHICH IS ALSO BENEFIACIAL FOR THE GOVERNMENT IN THE MEANS OF ECONOMY. FOR EXAMPLE, BUSINESS, DATA DEPICTS THAT 90% OF THE BUSINESS RUNS DUE TO AVAILABILITY OF THE VARIOUS SOCIAL SITES AS IT HAS REDUED THE BARRIER INBETWEEN COUNTRIES. ON THE OTHER HAND, IT HAS ALSO INCREASED THE FRADULENT ACTIVITY THROUGH INTERNET. BECAUSE PEOPLE ARE ASK TO PROVIDE THEIR PERSONAL DETAIL WHILE ACCESSING THE SOCIAL AAPLICATION. TEENEGRS ARE AT THE HIGH RISK BECAUSE THEY THEND TO BE MOE ATTARCTED AND HABITUAL TO USE SOCIAL SITES AND THIS LEADS THEM IN TO CRIMINAL ACTIVITIES SUCHH AS CYBER CRIME. FOR INSTANCE, CYBER CRIME REPORT SHOS THAT 80% OF THE CYBER OFFENCE HAS BEEN ATTEMPTED BY THE YOUNGERS AND END UP THEIR LIFE BY DOING SUISIDE. THUS, THIS ESSAY WILL NOT THINK THAT PROS CAN OVERCOME THE CONS. IN CONCLUSION. SOCIAL SITES INDEED BECOME AN ASSET FOR PEOPLE BUT ONE SHOULD NEVER NEGOCIATE ITS HUGE IMPACT ON YOUTH'S LIFE. AS TODAY'S GENERATION IS OUR FUTURE GENERATION.
NOWADAYS
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SOCIAL
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MEDIA
HAS BECOME A VITAL TOOL FOR VARIOUS
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USES
IN EVERYBODY'S
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LIFE
. FOR
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SIGINING
UP
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SOCIAL
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MEDIA
ACCOUNT, ONE NEEDS TO ADDRESS
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NUMERIOUS
PERSONAL
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DETAILS
SUCH AS CONTACT NUMBER, BERTH
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DETAILS
AND
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SO
ON. AS PER THIS ESSAY, IT IS NOT SAFE TO PROVIDE ALL THE PRIVATE INFORMATION ON
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SOCIAL
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MEDIA
AS IT MIGHT BE
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LIFE
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THRETINING
,
THUS
, DEMERITS CAN NEVER BE
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NEGLETED
.

ON THE ONE HAND, THE PRIME ADVANTAGE OF THE
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SOCIAL
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MEDIA
IS THAT IT HAS ABILITY TO CONNECT
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PEOPLE
TO
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EACHOTHER
AROUND THE WORLD
ESPECIALLY
FOR
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BUSINESS
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PEOPLE
. BUSINESSMEN CAN
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EXAPAND
THEIR
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BUSINESS
INTERNATIONALLY
AND EARN MORE PROFITS, WHICH IS
ALSO
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BENEFIACIAL
FOR THE
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GOVERNMENT
IN THE MEANS OF ECONOMY.
FOR EXAMPLE
,
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BUSINESS
, DATA DEPICTS THAT 90% OF THE
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BUSINESS
RUNS DUE TO AVAILABILITY OF THE VARIOUS
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SOCIAL
SITES AS IT HAS
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REDUED
THE BARRIER
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INBETWEEN
COUNTRIES.

ON THE OTHER HAND
, IT HAS
ALSO
INCREASED THE
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FRADULENT
ACTIVITY THROUGH INTERNET.
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BECAUSE
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PEOPLE
ARE ASK TO PROVIDE THEIR PERSONAL DETAIL WHILE ACCESSING THE
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SOCIAL
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AAPLICATION
.
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TEENEGRS
ARE AT THE HIGH
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RISK
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BECAUSE
THEY
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THEND
TO BE MOE
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ATTARCTED
AND HABITUAL TO
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USE
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SOCIAL
SITES AND THIS LEADS THEM IN TO CRIMINAL ACTIVITIES
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SUCHH AS
CYBER CRIME.
FOR INSTANCE
, CYBER CRIME REPORT
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SHOS
THAT 80% OF THE CYBER
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OFFENCE
HAS
BEEN ATTEMPTED
BY THE
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YOUNGERS
AND
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END
UP THEIR
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LIFE
BY DOING
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SUISIDE
.
THUS
, THIS ESSAY WILL NOT
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THINK
THAT PROS CAN OVERCOME THE CONS.

IN CONCLUSION
.
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SOCIAL
SITES
INDEED
BECOME AN ASSET FOR
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PEOPLE
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BUT
ONE SHOULD NEVER
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NEGOCIATE
ITS HUGE IMPACT ON YOUTH'S
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LIFE
. AS
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TODAY
'S GENERATION IS OUR FUTURE GENERATION.
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IELTS essay Question 1What do you miss most about your home when you are away? Use specific details in your explanation. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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