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q5. 3 The man has a job which is not what he expected. The two people talk about the man's problem. Describe the problem and state which of the two solutions you prefer and why. v.1

q5. 3 The man has a job which is not what he expected. The two people talk about the man's problem. Describe the problem and state which of the two solutions you prefer and why. v. 1
It is known for some people that English, which is now one of the most widely spoken languages in the world, maybe the only single language spoken all over the world. While it might lead to many benefits as developing the economy and trading for some countries, it might lead to the disappearance of other languages and affect countries' economy which depends upon tourism as a source of income. In the following lines, both the positives and negatives will be thoroughly discussed. The main benefits of having a single language rather than multiple languages are to aid understanding, promote learning and economic growth as it will facilitate communication among several countries. For instance, moreover, it would be easier to exchange foreign workers and thereby fill the skill gap among the countries, the trade will flourish, and thus the world will have a healthier economy. Nevertheless, despite the merits previously mentioned, it might be a certain reason of the extinction of localism as the disappearance of the countries' language would lead to the loss of their culture and thereby that their identity. Even having an international language will ease understanding, attaining the level of fluency and accent is not available for some countries. For instance, Canada, Australia, and the US have English as their first language. However, they differ in their accent. Furthermore, this leads to the extinction of local language and local culture that have been preserved by the ancestors for a long time ago. In conclusion, a single universal language is definitely beneficial for every country and improves the inter-country relationship among them, but it is certainly devastating for the local language and damages the local culture in future. It is supposed that maintaining a language and identity should be prioritized to ensure a rich world heritage for future generations.
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that English, which is
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now
one of the most
widely
spoken
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languages
in the
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world
, maybe the
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only
single
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language
spoken all over the
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world
. While it might
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lead
to
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many
benefits as developing the economy and trading for
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some
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countries
, it might
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lead
to the disappearance of other
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languages
and affect countries' economy which depends upon tourism as a source of income. In the following lines, both the positives and negatives will be
thoroughly
discussed.

The main benefits of having a single
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language
rather
than multiple
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languages
are to aid understanding, promote learning and economic growth as it will facilitate communication among several
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countries
.
For instance
,
moreover
, it would be easier to exchange foreign workers and thereby fill the
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skill
gap among the
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countries
, the trade will flourish, and
thus
the
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world
will have a healthier economy.

Nevertheless
, despite the merits previously mentioned, it might be a certain reason of the extinction of
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localism
as the disappearance of the countries'
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language
would
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lead
to the loss of their culture and thereby that their identity. Even having an international
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language
will
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ease
understanding, attaining the level of fluency and accent is not available for
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some
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countries
.
For instance
, Canada, Australia, and the US have English as their
first
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language
.
However
, they differ in their accent.
Furthermore
, this leads to the extinction of
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local
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language
and
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local
culture that have
been preserved
by the ancestors for a long time ago.

In conclusion
, a single universal
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language
is definitely beneficial for every
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country
and
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improves
the inter-country relationship among them,
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but
it is
certainly
devastating for the
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local
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language
and damages the
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local
culture
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
. It
is supposed
that maintaining a
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language
and identity should
be prioritized
to ensure a rich
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world
heritage for future generations.
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He who knows no foreign languages know nothing of his own.
Johann Wolfgang von Goethe

IELTS essay q5. 3 The man has a job which is not what he expected. The two people talk about the man's problem. Describe the problem and state which of the two solutions you prefer and why. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
301 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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