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q3. Turn off the hitting system. The women expresses her opinion of the announcement. State the opinion and the reasons she gives for having that opinion. v.1

q3. Turn off the hitting system. The women expresses her opinion of the announcement. State the opinion and the reasons she gives for having that opinion. v. 1
TODAY'S WORLD IS BECOMING MORE AND MORE ADVANCED DUE TO THE TECHNOLOGY UPGRADE. HENCE, PLETHORA OF FOLKS CHOOSE TO HAVE ONLINE CLASSES RATHER THAN ATTANDING TRADITIONAL SCHOOL. THIS ESSAY WILL BELIEVE THAT THE E- LEARNIG HAS IT'S BOTH ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES. FISRTLY, THIS ESSSAY WILL DISCUSS IT'S MAJOR ADVANTAGE AND SECONDLY, WHAT ARE THE DISADVANTAGES OF ONLINE LEARNING INSTEAD OF TRADITIONAL SCHOOL. ON THE ONE HAND, THE PRIME PROS OF E-LEARNING IS THAT IT IS COVENIENT AS PER THE PERSON PREFFERENCE CONSEQUENTLY, INDIVIDUAL CAN ATTEND CLASSESS WHENEVER HE/SHE HAS TIME EVEN DURING TRAVELING IF AN INDIVIDUAL IS COMFORTABLE. AS A ARESULT, PEOPLE CAN SAVE MORE TIME FOR OTHER ESSENTIAL CHORES THUS, THEIR PRODUCTIVITY WOULD BE INCREASED. FOR INSTANCE, AS PER THE UK TEENAGERS SURVEY REVEALED THAT 90% OF THE UK YOUTH CHOOSE TO LEARN THROUGH THE INTERNET BECAISE THEY FOUND IT MORE EASY AND CONFORTABLE. ON THE OTHER HAND, IT DOES HAS DEVASTATING IMPACTS SUCH AS, WELNESS ISSUES, LACK OF SCOCIALIZATION AN SO ON. THIS IS BECAUSE, PEOPLE RARELY GO OUT SIDE AND THIS MIGHT AFFECT THEIR HEALTH BY LESS PHYSICAL EXERCISE. THIS RESULT IN THE INTROVERT NATURE AND I THINK IT IS NOT WORTH F BEIMG SO IN THIS FAST PACE WORLD. FOR EXAMPLE, THE DEVELOPED COUNTRY'S HEALTH DATA SHOWN THAT 80% FOLKS ARE HAVING SOME TYPE OF ILLNESS, SUCH AS OBESIY, DEPRESSION AND MANY MORE. THIS BECAUSE SITTING AT ONE PLACE. HOWEVEVR, IF INDIVIDUALS USE THIS AS PER THEIR REQUIREMENT THAN SURELY THE THE NEGATIVE IMPACT COULD BE DECLINED. IN CONCLUSION, ONLINE LEARNING FACILOTY INDEED HAS MORE PROS THAN CONS BUT ONE SHOULD NEVER IGNORE ITS DETRIMENTAL EFFECT ON THE HEALTH. CONSEQUENTLY, HELATH IS WEALTH.
TODAY
'S WORLD IS BECOMING MORE AND MORE ADVANCED DUE TO THE TECHNOLOGY UPGRADE.
HENCE
, PLETHORA OF FOLKS CHOOSE TO HAVE ONLINE CLASSES
RATHER
THAN
ATTANDING
TRADITIONAL SCHOOL. THIS ESSAY WILL BELIEVE THAT THE E-
LEARNIG
HAS IT'S BOTH ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES.
FISRTLY
, THIS
ESSSAY
WILL DISCUSS IT'S MAJOR ADVANTAGE AND
SECONDLY
, WHAT ARE THE DISADVANTAGES OF ONLINE LEARNING
INSTEAD
OF TRADITIONAL SCHOOL.

ON THE ONE HAND, THE PRIME PROS OF E-LEARNING IS THAT IT IS
COVENIENT
AS PER THE PERSON
PREFFERENCE
CONSEQUENTLY
, INDIVIDUAL CAN ATTEND
CLASSESS
WHENEVER HE/SHE HAS TIME EVEN DURING TRAVELING IF AN INDIVIDUAL IS COMFORTABLE. AS A
ARESULT
,
PEOPLE
CAN SAVE MORE TIME FOR OTHER ESSENTIAL CHORES
THUS
, THEIR PRODUCTIVITY WOULD
BE INCREASED
.
FOR INSTANCE
, AS PER THE UK
TEENAGERS
SURVEY REVEALED THAT 90% OF THE UK YOUTH CHOOSE TO LEARN THROUGH THE INTERNET
BECAISE
THEY FOUND IT MORE EASY AND
CONFORTABLE
.

ON THE OTHER HAND
, IT DOES HAS DEVASTATING IMPACTS SUCH AS,
WELNESS
ISSUES, LACK OF
SCOCIALIZATION
AN
SO
ON. THIS IS
BECAUSE
,
PEOPLE
RARELY GO
OUT SIDE
AND THIS MIGHT AFFECT THEIR HEALTH BY LESS PHYSICAL EXERCISE. THIS RESULT IN THE INTROVERT NATURE AND I
THINK
IT IS NOT WORTH F
BEIMG
SO
IN THIS
FAST
PACE WORLD.

FOR EXAMPLE
, THE
DEVELOPED COUNTRY
'S HEALTH DATA SHOWN THAT 80% FOLKS ARE HAVING
SOME
TYPE OF ILLNESS, SUCH AS
OBESIY
, DEPRESSION AND
MANY
MORE. THIS
BECAUSE
SITTING AT ONE PLACE.
HOWEVEVR
, IF INDIVIDUALS
USE
THIS AS PER THEIR REQUIREMENT THAN
SURELY
THE THE
NEGATIVE
IMPACT COULD
BE DECLINED
.

IN CONCLUSION
, ONLINE LEARNING
FACILOTY
INDEED
HAS MORE PROS THAN CONS
BUT
ONE SHOULD NEVER
IGNORE
ITS DETRIMENTAL EFFECT ON THE HEALTH.
CONSEQUENTLY
,
HELATH
IS WEALTH.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
If we spoke a different language, we would perceive a somewhat different world.
Ludwig Wittgenstein

IELTS essay q3. Turn off the hitting system. The women expresses her opinion of the announcement. State the opinion and the reasons she gives for having that opinion. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
277 words
7.5
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