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q1 Describe a book that you believe is the most useful to you. Please explainthe reason and include specific examples and details in your explanation. v.1

q1 Describe a book that you believe is the most useful to you. Please explainthe reason and include specific examples and details in your explanation. v. 1
Nowadays, a car is the most used mode of transportation for many of mankind. Although it will result in massive pollution, it can be overcome by certain measures. The usage of four-wheelers is one of the major causes of pollution in the world. The volume of polluted air excreted from cars is unlimited, which damages the environment dramatically. A study conducted by the University of Abu Dhabi showed that environmental pollution has increased simultaneously as per the sale of cars in the market, which proven that overusing this mode for transportation disrupts the environmental balance. Furthermore, another crucial after effect with this is the uncontrollable traffic jam. People prefer to go to work with their own vehicle even if there is company transportation available. For instance, in Dubai, slow-moving traffic is very common during the mornings and evenings because of the increasing number of private vehicles that hits on the road and leads to these problems. However, these kinds of situations can be solved by taking necessary actions like increasing the usage of public transportation. In other words, currently, the metro and buses are technically advanced and maintained very well for the convenience of the public. For example, in the Middle East, metro services and government regulated buses are having uninterrupted services to ensure that people can rely on them than the others. In addition, it has helped this region to reduce the environmental problems along with traffic regulations. In conclusion, troubles arising from overusing cars can be reduced effectively by promoting public service vehicles.
Nowadays, a
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car
is the most
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used
mode of
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transportation
for
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many
of mankind. Although it will result in massive pollution, it can
be overcome
by certain measures.

The usage of
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four-wheelers
is one of the major causes of pollution in the world. The volume of polluted air excreted from
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cars
is unlimited
, which damages the environment
dramatically
. A study conducted by the University of Abu Dhabi
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showed
that environmental pollution has increased
simultaneously
as per the sale of
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cars
in the market, which proven that overusing this mode for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transportation
disrupts the environmental balance.

Furthermore
, another crucial after effect with this is the uncontrollable traffic jam.
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People
prefer to go to work with their
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own
vehicle even if there is
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company
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transportation
available.
For instance
, in Dubai, slow-moving traffic is
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very
common during the mornings and evenings
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because
of the increasing number of private vehicles that hits on the road and leads to these problems.

However
, these kinds of situations can
be solved
by taking necessary actions like increasing the usage of public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transportation
.
In other words
,
currently
, the metro and buses are
technically
advanced and maintained
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
well for the convenience of the public.
For example
, in the Middle East, metro services and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
regulated buses are having uninterrupted services to ensure that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can rely on them than the others.
In addition
, it has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
this region to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the environmental problems along with traffic regulations.

In conclusion
, troubles arising from overusing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
effectively
by promoting public service vehicles.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay q1 Describe a book that you believe is the most useful to you. Please explainthe reason and include specific examples and details in your explanation. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
255 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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