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Q1 Choose a person from your childhood. State why that person was significant for you. Give details and examples to support your explanation. v.1

Q1 Choose a person from your childhood. State why that person was significant for you. Give details and examples to support your explanation. v. 1
Recently, digital media have flourished and most people are using it to gather material about any mater. The question is that can child utilize online material for his study or he or she should focus on books and printed thing. The answer is that both ways are vital to shape learning of a pupil. However, if our analysis the online reading material then we will release that we can have huge data about any matter with minimal or at no cost. For instance, most students get assignments and do these tasks with the help of Google, YouTube and Wikipedia. Students do not need to go libraries and read a lot of material to gather relevant information now. They can get their relevant knowledge in one click. On the other hand, online material is not mostly reliable as printed material or books. It has a reason that publishers are responsible for content in text and helping books and if they make any mistake then they will bear fine by the authorities. Moreover, these books are checked again and again by different writers, so that these books become easy and best for their readers. Most students enjoy reading with printed material because the books do not put stress on their eyes and necks and it has less health issues as compared to online reading. In conclusion, learning can be done with the both methods, but for effective learning, students should employ both methods instead of relying only on one method. In this way, the student will become sharp with historical knowledge and modern trended material.
Recently, digital media have flourished and most
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people
are using it to gather
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material
about any mater. The question is that can child utilize
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online
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material
for his
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study or
he or she should focus on
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books
and printed thing. The answer is that both ways are vital to shape learning of a pupil.

However
, if our analysis the
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online
reading
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material
then we will release that we can have huge data about any matter with minimal or at no cost.
For instance
, most
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students
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get
assignments and do these tasks with the
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help
of Google, YouTube and Wikipedia.
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Students
do not need to go libraries and read
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a lot of
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material
to gather relevant information
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now
. They can
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get
their relevant knowledge in one click.

On the other hand
,
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online
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material
is not
mostly
reliable as printed
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material
or
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books
. It has a reason that publishers are responsible for content in text and helping
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books
and if they
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make
any mistake then they will bear fine by the authorities.
Moreover
, these
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books
are
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checked
again and again by
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different
writers,
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so
that these
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books
become easy and best for their readers. Most
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students
enjoy reading with printed
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material
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because
the
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books
do not put
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stress
on their eyes and necks and it has less health issues as compared to
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online
reading.

In conclusion
, learning can
be done
with the both methods,
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but
for effective learning,
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students
should employ both methods
instead
of relying
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only
on one method. In this way, the
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student
will become sharp with historical knowledge and modern trended
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material
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Q1 Choose a person from your childhood. State why that person was significant for you. Give details and examples to support your explanation. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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