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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. v.9

Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. v. 9
Since the beginning of the civilisation, colour is a big part of human life. Different research and experiments have been done to find the effect of colours on people’s mood and psychology and the findings show that feelings of people can be influenced by colour. Hence, public buildings are suggested to use appropriate colour for decoration to motivate people to feel better. I agree that colour can affect our psychology and that is why offices and other public buildings should have appropriate colour and decorations. Firstly, a public health service should be located at a nice place, have a comfortable environment and appropriate decoration so that people feel better being there. It is important for the patients who stay there for quite a while or visit there for treatments. The top priority should be the better treatment facility and skilled doctors and then the colour scheme and decoration should be set in a way so that people feel better being there. Green and white could be two suitable colours for a hospital. Colour of the building and decoration matter and that’s why the restaurants and food selling brands have invested a lot of money to find the right colour to inspire people to eat and drink. Almost every renowned restaurant has its own branding and colour to attract people.   Proper colour can keep people calm and help them feel better and that’s why it is especially important for the hospitals and other health care centres to have the right colour and decoration. From my experience, I can say that I can wait more time in a room with soothing colour and decoration than in a messy room with very bright colour.   A particular colour can trigger our brain and arouse our feelings unconsciously. Similarly colour and interior decoration used in an office building can affect the mood and psychology of employees. Natural and eye-soothing colours are better for our physical and mental health and directly related to our stress level. Hence using the most appropriate colour in offices is also important. From my personal experience, I can say that I find light green, aqua and white colour very eye-soothing and I prefer to stay in a room decorated using these colours. Probably a very bright red colour would give me a headache as it is often related to anger, frustration and fire. Thus I believe that colours are directly and indirectly related to people’s work performance, mental state and health. To conclude, I stand to claim that colour has a big effect on human psychology in many ways. Thus, colour or decoration of a room should never be selected randomly. Rather a good amount of time should be invested to colour any building.
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big
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been done
to find the effect of
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colours
on
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people’s
mood and
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psychology
and the findings
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people
can
be influenced
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colour
.
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buildings
are suggested
to
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use
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appropriate
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colour
for
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decoration
to motivate
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people
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feel
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better
. I
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psychology
and
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why offices and other public
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buildings
should have
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appropriate
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colour
and decorations.

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, a public health service should
be located
at a nice place, have a comfortable environment and
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appropriate
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decoration
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so
that
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people
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feel
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better
being there. It is
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important
for the patients who stay there for quite a while or visit there for treatments. The top priority should be the
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better
treatment facility and skilled doctors and then the
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colour
scheme and
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decoration
should
be set
in a way
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so
that
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people
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feel
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better
being there. Green and white could be two suitable
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colours
for a hospital.
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Colour
of the
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building
and
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decoration
matter and that’s why the restaurants and food selling brands have invested
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a lot of
money to find the right
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colour
to inspire
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people
to eat and drink. Almost every renowned restaurant has its
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own
branding and
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colour
to attract
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people
.
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Proper
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colour
can
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keep
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people
calm and
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help
them
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feel
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better
and that’s why it is
especially
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important
for the hospitals and other health care
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centres
to have the right
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colour
and
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decoration
. From my experience, I can say that I can wait more time in a
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room
with soothing
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colour
and
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decoration
than in a messy
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room
with
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very
bright
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colour
.
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A particular
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colour
can trigger our brain and arouse our feelings
unconsciously
.

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Similarly
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colour
and interior
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decoration
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used
in an office
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building
can affect the mood and
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psychology
of employees. Natural and eye-soothing
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colours
are
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better
for our physical and mental health and
directly
related to our
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stress
level.
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Hence
using the most
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appropriate
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colour
in offices is
also
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important
. From my personal experience, I can say that I find light green, aqua and white
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colour
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very
eye-soothing and I prefer to stay in a
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room
decorated using these
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colours
.
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a
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very
bright red
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colour
would give me a headache as it is
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often
related to anger, frustration and fire.
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Thus
I believe that
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colours
are
directly
and
indirectly
related to
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people’s
work performance, mental state and health.

To conclude
, I stand to claim that
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colour
has a
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big
effect on human
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psychology
in
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many
ways.
Thus
,
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colour
or
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decoration
of a
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room
should never
be selected
randomly
.
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a
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good
amount of time should
be invested
to
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colour
any
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building
.
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44Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
33Mistakes

IELTS essay Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. v. 9

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
455 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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