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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work? v.2

Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work? v. 2
According to psychologists colour can affect feeling of people and thus attention should be given to colour schemes when we decorate places such as office and hospitals. Colour influences not only peoples' health, but also capacity for work. I strongly agree that colour plays a very important role and have a deep connection with a human mind. We can change the environment of some place just changing the colour of the area. For an example in an office, we should decorate with such colour which make the place more energetic and professional where as in hospital, we should use some light colour which keeps our mind calm and make the surrounding more peaceful which is very necessary for those patients who are admitted in the hospital. Colour can enhance people capacity to work for an example, it is more attractive to keep bright colour in the workplace where it will give some positive energy to the workers and make them more productive in their work. Not only outside in our own house we should decorate our room, according to our requirements, for example We should use bright pink or blue colour in our kids room so that kid always feels cheerful where as we should apply light colours in our bedroom to feel relaxed at night. In conclusion, Yes it is true that the mood of people will change accordingly with the colour of the environment. We can make some place more significant by a choosing proper colour. It may you feel sometimes happy and sometimes sad. Always we should keep this in our mind while decorating any such places.
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can affect feeling of
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attention should be
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to
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schemes when we decorate
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places
such as office and hospitals.
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influences not
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peoples' health,
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but
also
capacity for work.

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plays a
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very
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important
role and have a deep connection with a human mind. We can
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change
the environment of
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some
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place
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just
changing the
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colour
of the area. For an example in an office, we should decorate with such
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colour
which
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make
the
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place
more energetic and professional
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in hospital, we should
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use
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some
light
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colour
which
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keeps
our mind calm and
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make
the surrounding more peaceful which is
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very
necessary for those patients who
are admitted
in the hospital.

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can enhance
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people
capacity to work for an example, it is more attractive to
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keep
bright
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colour
in the workplace where it will give
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some
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positive
energy to the workers and
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make
them more productive in their work. Not
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only
outside in our
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own
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house
we should decorate our room, according to our requirements,
for example
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use
bright pink or blue
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colour
in our kids room
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so
that kid always feels cheerful
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where as
we should apply light
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colours
in our bedroom to feel relaxed at night.

In conclusion
, Yes it is true that the mood of
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people
will
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change
accordingly
with the
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colour
of the environment. We can
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make
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some
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place
more significant by a choosing proper
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colour
. It may you feel
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sometimes
happy and
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sometimes
sad.
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we should
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keep
this in our mind while decorating any such
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places
.
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9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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