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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. v.8

Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. v. 8
Colour has always played an important role in the human history and according to some recent research, it affects our consciousness and mood. I personally believe that a proper colour represents a good will and shows tenderness and this is why public buildings should have proper colour and decoration. To begin with, we are associated with different colours from the very beginning of our life. Parents and teachers teach us different colours and scientists believe that a child’s ability to classify different colours is connected with his calibre and talent. Thus our brains associate this colours with our moods and feelings. For instance, the red light on the streets sends an immediate alert to our brain to stop our vehicle while the green colour signals us to go ahead. Thus we are trained to react and feel differently with the association of colours. From this perspective, it is important to use soothing and accepted colours in places like schools, hospitals and offices. Furthermore, we tend to associate colours with different events from our personal experience. For this reasons, some people relate red with blood while white with peace. Universally blue is the colour of nature and fewer people would complain about it. Besides, people in some countries relate colours with certain moods. For example, more than one quarter Americans believe that the blue has something to do with comfort and cosiness while red represents violence. Due to the influence of colours in human psychology, all renowned food and beverage retailers have their own colour schemes. According to an article published on the Huffington Post, a combination of slate blue mixes with olive green and soft cream has helped to foster a team environment in many organisations. This also states that it has increased the team spirit and productivity of employees. To conclude, people’s wellbeing often depends on psychological condition and since colour has an acute influence on our mood, proper colour schemes should be used in our homes, offices, schools and public places.
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has always played an
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important
role in the human history and according to
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some
recent research, it affects our consciousness and
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mood
. I
personally
believe that a proper
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colour
represents a
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good
will and
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shows
tenderness and this is why public buildings should have proper
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colour
and decoration.

To
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begin
with, we
are associated
with
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different
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colours
from the
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very
beginning of our life. Parents and teachers teach us
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different
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colours
and scientists believe that a child’s ability to classify
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different
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colours
is connected
with his
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calibre
and talent.
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Thus
our brains associate this
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colours
with our
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moods
and feelings.
For instance
, the red light on the streets
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sends
an immediate alert to our brain to
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stop
our vehicle while the green
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colour
signals us to go ahead.
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Thus
we
are trained
to react and feel
differently
with the association of
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colours
. From this perspective, it is
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important
to
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use
soothing and
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accepted
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colours
in places like schools, hospitals and offices.

Furthermore
, we tend to associate
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colours
with
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different
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events
from our personal experience. For
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this
reasons,
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some
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people
relate red with blood while white with peace.
Universally
blue is the
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colour
of nature and fewer
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people
would complain about it.
Besides
,
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people
in
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some
countries relate
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colours
with certain
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moods
.
For example
, more than one quarter Americans believe that the blue has something to do with comfort and
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cosiness
while red represents violence. Due to the influence of
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colours
in human psychology, all renowned food and beverage retailers have their
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own
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colour
schemes.

According to an article published on the Huffington Post, a combination of slate blue mixes with olive green and soft cream has
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helped
to foster a team environment in
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many
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organisations
. This
also
states that it has increased the team spirit and productivity of employees.

To conclude
,
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people’s
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wellbeing
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often
depends on psychological condition and since
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colour
has an acute influence on our
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mood
, proper
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colour
schemes should be
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used
in our homes, offices, schools and public places.
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IELTS essay Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. v. 8

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