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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work? v.6

Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work? v. 6
Scientists believe that colour could influence people's feelings. Therefore, many people think that we may provide some colour schemes for decorating places, such as hospitals or offices. Although the first reaction to some people is to oppose such claims. Nevertheless, there are persuasive reasons to agree with this statement. In the following paragraphs, there are several perspectives to discuss this issue more in-depth. Firstly, the main reason to support the position is that paint could affect one's mental health. Take my friend, Tina, for example, she painted her office in blue. Since blue is her favourite, however, while the whole surroundings are in blue, and it makes Tina feel down and stressed. From such examples, it demonstrates that paint is not only for decoration. Moreover, it is the main factor in psychology. Also, another reason for my belief is that the stain of the surroundings could influence people's emotions and physical appearances. For instance, my sister, Ann, went to a hospital for the health check. She felt scared while the entrance was dark and the walls were all in white. Her heartbeats were incredibly high, and the nurse didn't figure out the reasons. Consequently, it can be said that the stain not only influences one's mental health but also the physical body. To conclude, it is not to say that other points of view are totally without merits. Nonetheless, the reasons I have presented could support the position it is true that the colour could affect our daily life and working abilities. Hence, we should put more attention on it.
Scientists believe that
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colour
could influence
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people
's feelings.
Therefore
,
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many
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people
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think
that we may provide
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some
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colour
schemes for decorating places, such as hospitals or offices.
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Although
the
first
reaction to
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some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
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is
to oppose such claims.
Nevertheless
, there are persuasive
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reasons
to
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agree
with this statement. In the following paragraphs, there are several perspectives to discuss this issue more in-depth.

Firstly
, the main
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reason
to support the position is that paint could affect one's mental health. Take my friend, Tina,
for example
, she painted her office in blue. Since blue is her
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favourite
,
however
, while the whole surroundings are in blue, and it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
Tina feel down and
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stressed
. From such examples, it demonstrates that paint is not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
for decoration.
Moreover
, it is the main factor in psychology.

Also
, another
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reason
for my belief is that the stain of the surroundings could influence
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's emotions and physical appearances.
For instance
, my sister, Ann, went to a hospital for the health
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check
. She felt scared while the entrance was dark and the walls were all in white. Her heartbeats were
incredibly
high, and the nurse didn't figure out the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reasons
.
Consequently
, it can
be said
that the stain not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
influences one's mental health
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but
also
the physical body.

To conclude
, it is not to say that other points of view are
totally
without merits. Nonetheless, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reasons
I have presented could support the position it is true that the
Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.
colour
could affect our daily life and working abilities.
Hence
, we should put more attention on it.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work? v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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