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Proofreaders are commonly stressful to determine the topic which will be televised and published on the press. The shocking news such as celebrity scandals, precautions of natural disasters or acts of terrorism are regularly favored. A research over 1100 v.2

Proofreaders are commonly stressful to determine the topic which will be televised and published on the press. The shocking news such as celebrity scandals, precautions of natural disasters or acts of terrorism are regularly favored. A research over 1100 v. 2
Proofreaders are commonly stressful to determine the topic which will be televised and published on the press. The shocking news such as celebrity scandals, precautions of natural disasters or acts of terrorism are regularly favored. A research over 1100 people from 17 different countries revealed that humans tend to be attracted to bad news over good news. This is explained as a survival instinct when readers and spectators unintentionally pay more attention to an earthquake, a storm or a flood. Imagine that ignoring the negative news like the oncoming hurricane is very more dangerous than ignoring the positive news like a dog recusing a boy trapped on a tree. In addition, curiosity is a human nature, hence we are likely to care about other people’s secrets, especially the famous people. As proof, rumors and spoilers of a singer which easily stimulate reader’s interest is frequently printed on the cover. Nonetheless, the research also affirmed that up to two-out-of-five candidates, approximately a half, do not lean toward either side of news. It means not that all people constantly desire to read or watch unpleasant events, therefore the pleasant ones should be concerned by the journalists to present more to readers and viewers. The nice stories will help people to be less pessimistic and realize that life does not only contain the crimes, the calamities and the terrors. There are still the bright things surrounded us, such as achievements that environmentalists are trying to keep the greening of our planet or dedications that the singer who is being criticized contributed to the world, etc … In conclusion, the true that people appeal to the distressing information is totally the instinct of human beings. In spite of that, to reduce the burden of life, the media people should report increasingly the significant messages in order to make people love each other more and enjoy our life more.
Proofreaders are
commonly
stressful to determine the topic which will
be televised
and published on the press. The shocking
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
such as celebrity scandals, precautions of natural disasters or acts of terrorism are
regularly
favored.

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A research
over 1100
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people
from 17
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different
countries revealed that humans tend to
be attracted
to
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bad
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news
over
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good
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news
. This is
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explained
as a survival instinct when readers and spectators
unintentionally
pay more attention to an earthquake, a storm or a flood. Imagine that ignoring the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
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news
like the oncoming hurricane is
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very
more
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dangerous
than ignoring the
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positive
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news
like a dog recusing a boy trapped on a tree.
In addition
, curiosity is a human nature,
hence
we are likely to care about other
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people’s
secrets,
especially
the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
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people
. As proof, rumors and spoilers of a singer which
easily
stimulate reader’s interest is
frequently
printed on the cover.

Nonetheless, the research
also
affirmed that up to two-out-of-five candidates, approximately a half, do not lean toward either side of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
. It means not that all
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people
constantly
desire to read or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
unpleasant
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events
,
therefore
the pleasant ones should
be concerned
by the journalists to present more to readers and viewers. The nice stories will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to be less pessimistic and realize that life does not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
contain the crimes, the calamities and the terrors. There are
still
the bright things surrounded us, such as achievements that environmentalists are trying to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
the greening of our planet or dedications that the singer who is
being criticized
contributed to the world, etc …

In conclusion
, the true that
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people
appeal to the distressing information is
totally
the instinct of human beings.
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In spite of
that, to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the burden of life, the media
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
should report
increasingly
the significant messages in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
each other more and enjoy our life more.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Proofreaders are commonly stressful to determine the topic which will be televised and published on the press. The shocking news such as celebrity scandals, precautions of natural disasters or acts of terrorism are regularly favored. A research over 1100 v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
314 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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    Present relevant ideas
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