Professional sports people are often idolised by young children. Some people think that they, therefore, have a responsibility to be good role models at all times for children. Do you agree or disagree? v.1
Professional sports people are often idolised by young children. Some people think that they, therefore, have a responsibility to be good role models at all times for children. v. 1
Apparently, young children often admire talented and famous people especially sportsmen. That is why professional sports are thought to be good role models. Nonetheless, in my perspective, it is not necessary for them to set perfect examples at all times for admirers.
At the outset, professional sports always make effort to show their positive qualities in most of situations, which has profound influence on children's development. Besides, their enthusiasm in training and competing can become helpful source of inspiration for adolescents. As a result, youngsters will think and act more positively, they will love playing sports and they will harbour dream of being professional athletes like their idols. For instance, Mbappe - a very young and famous football player playing for PSG team used to idolize C. Ronaldo - a superstar of world footballer playing for Juventus team. When being asked, Mbappe said that Ronaldo was the main reason he decided to practice diligently to become a professional sport.
However, no one is perfect, so are the sportsmen. Being perfect role models sometimes makes them stressful so they do wrong things as a way of relieving pressure to return the true version of themselves. Rooney - a well known football player who used to play for Manchester United is a typical example. A few years ago, having been in charge of being a good role model all the time and having been scrutinized by the press made him so depressed that he drank a lot and fought with his teammates to release his bad mood. In other words, doing wrong deeds helps sportsmen avoid suffering from mental problems and survive in this harsh world.
To sum up, I think that it is unessential for the professional sports to set a good example at all times because nobody is perfect and normal people are those who have both good and bad aspects.
Apparently
, young children
often
admire talented and
famous
people
especially
sportsmen.
That is
why
professional
sports
are
thought
to be
good
role models. Nonetheless, in my perspective, it is not necessary for them to set
perfect
examples at all times for admirers.
At the outset,
professional
sports
always
make
effort to
show
their
positive
qualities in
most of situations
, which has profound influence on children's development.
Besides
, their enthusiasm in training and competing can become helpful source of inspiration for adolescents.
As a result
, youngsters will
think
and act more
positively
, they will
love
playing
sports and
they will
harbour
dream of being
professional
athletes like their idols.
For instance
,
Mbappe
-
a
very
young and
famous
football player playing for PSG team
used
to idolize C. Ronaldo
-
a superstar of world footballer playing for Juventus team. When
being asked
,
Mbappe
said that Ronaldo was the main reason he decided to practice
diligently
to become a
professional
sport.
However
, no one is
perfect
,
so
are the sportsmen. Being
perfect
role models
sometimes
makes
them stressful
so
they do
wrong
things as a way of relieving pressure to return the true version of themselves. Rooney
-
a well known football player who
used
to play for Manchester United is a typical example. A few years ago, having been in charge of being a
good
role model all the time and having
been scrutinized
by the press made him
so
depressed that he drank a lot and fought with his teammates to release his
bad
mood.
In other words
, doing
wrong
deeds
helps
sportsmen avoid suffering from mental problems and survive in this harsh world.
To sum up, I
think
that it is unessential for the
professional
sports
to set a
good
example at all times
because
nobody is
perfect
and normal
people
are those who have both
good
and
bad
aspects.
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