Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic There are many different types of music in the world today Why do we need music Is the traditional music of a country more important than the Inte v.3
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic There are many different types of music in the world today Why do we need music Is the traditional music of a country more important than the Inte v. 3
Music is also an asset of a nation. In the day and age we live, research has reported variety of music on the earth. There are never ending debates such as What is the purpose of music? Native music of a country outweighs international music? . In my perspective, Traditional music is extremely important than other music. Because, it is another way of traditional heritage representation. In the following essay, we will discuss both the argument with some possible proof before reaching a concrete decision.
Indeed, international music it is one more example of westernization. There are many songs such as Pop, rock played in leisure places such as gym, café etc. Because these songs precisely, playing a Rock or a fast beat song at gym motivates people to exercise. However, it cannot be represent as a traditional music of the nation. For instance, Star Bucks in Delhi, India may play pop songs for its customers. Nonetheless, India being impeccable in Carnatic music at worldwide, may not include electric music in its list.
On the flip side, while some argue, traditional music is very important. Current generation, always look for some retreat. In other words, they are interested mix and match of rhythmic music. Thus, recent statistics report explains, a group of musician has introduced a hybrid music to tangle traditional and western in the form of techno-classic music.
In my opinion, I neither support to Traditional music nor International music, that two group argue. Nevertheless, traditional music depicts the symbol of a country. It represents the beauty of music has evolved over the period of years till-date. Therefore, we could enjoy the foreign music for an interim enjoyment but it cannot be tagged as a native music.
Music
is
also
an asset of a nation. In the day and age we
live
, research has reported variety of
music
on the earth. There are never ending debates such as What is the purpose of
music
? Native
music
of a country outweighs international
music
?
.
In my perspective,
Traditional
music
is
extremely
important
than other
music
.
Because
, it is another way of
traditional
heritage representation. In the following essay, we will discuss both the argument with
some
possible proof
before
reaching a concrete decision.
Indeed
, international
music
it is one more example of
westernization
. There are
many
songs such as Pop, rock played in leisure places such as gym, café etc.
Because
these songs
precisely
, playing a Rock or a
fast
beat song at gym motivates
people
to exercise.
However
, it cannot be
represent
as a
traditional
music
of the nation.
For instance
, Star Bucks in Delhi, India may play pop songs for its customers. Nonetheless, India being impeccable in
Carnatic
music
at worldwide, may not include electric
music
in its list.
On the flip side, while
some
argue,
traditional
music
is
very
important
.
Current
generation, always look for
some
retreat.
In other words
, they
are interested
mix and match of rhythmic
music
.
Thus
, recent statistics report
explains
, a group of musician has introduced a hybrid
music
to tangle
traditional
and western in the form of techno-classic music.
In my opinion, I neither support to
Traditional
music
nor International
music
, that two group argue.
Nevertheless
,
traditional
music
depicts the symbol of a country. It represents the beauty of
music
has evolved over the period of years till-date.
Therefore
, we could enjoy the foreign
music
for an interim enjoyment
but
it cannot
be tagged
as a native
music
.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes