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Newspapers have great influence on people’s opinions and ideas. What are the reasons of the phenomenon and analyze the positive and negative effects of the phenomenon. v.1

Newspapers have great influence on people’s opinions and ideas. What are the reasons of the phenomenon and analyze the positive and negative effects of the phenomenon. v. 1
It is true that newspaper have been impacting tremendously on human' s opinions and ideas. The main plausible reason could be identified and this trend could bring both benefits and drawbacks to readers. The major possible justification, which could explain for this tendency, could be that newspapers are so prevalent that everybody could have access to them on a regular basis. It is fair to say that newspapers in this day and age are universally acessible due to the fact that people could get them in certain newsstands, even in remote areas with reasonable price or free online version whenever they browse the Internet. It results in the fact that newspaper readers, either avid or not, could easily come across a newspaper wherever and whenever they are, meaning that they would constantly expose to them, which make those readers have a great faith in what information this source of information give, assuming that they are authentic and reliable. This mean that this unadvertantly influence reader' s opinions and ideas. This trend, however, could confer both benefits and drawbacks towards those people who peruse these newspapers. On the one hand, the main positive advantage of this could be that it could help people keep abreast of up-to-the-minute information. Therefore, those read these up-to-date information could have the modern view towards life in comparison with those counterparts who donot keep update with latest news. To illustrate, some national newspapers tend to provide news about mistaken belief about gender discrimination and show some detrimental consequences of this trend. People, who read these facts would change their mind towards women and discard this traditional stereotype. On the other hand, the major drawback of the impacts of newspapers could be that people could have mistaken ideas if they read up on the misleading reports such as the exageration about crime scenes could cause frustration among readers. In conclusion, the key reason for the trend that newspapers have the great influences on people' s ideas and opinions as well as the positive and negative sides of this trend are evident.
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have been impacting
tremendously
on
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human&
#039; s opinions and
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ideas
. The main plausible reason could
be identified
and this
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trend
could bring both benefits and drawbacks to readers.

The major possible justification, which could
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explain
for this tendency, could be that
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newspapers
are
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so
prevalent that everybody could have access to them on a regular basis. It is
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fair
to say that
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newspapers
in this day and age are
universally
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acessible
due to the fact that
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people
could
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get
them in certain newsstands, even in remote areas with reasonable price or free online version whenever they browse the Internet. It results in the fact that
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newspaper
readers, either avid or not, could
easily
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come
across a
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newspaper
wherever and whenever they are, meaning that they would
constantly
expose to them, which
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make
those readers have a great faith in what
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information
this source of
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information
give, assuming that they are authentic and reliable. This mean that this
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unadvertantly
influence
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reader&
#039; s opinions and
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ideas
.

This
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trend
,
however
, could confer both benefits and drawbacks towards those
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people
who peruse these
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newspapers
. On the one hand, the main
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positive
advantage of this could be that it could
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help
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people
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keep
abreast of up-to-the-minute
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information
.
Therefore
, those read these up-to-date
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information
could have the modern view towards life
in comparison
with those counterparts who
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donot
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keep
update with
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latest
news. To illustrate,
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some
national
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newspapers
tend to provide news about mistaken belief about gender discrimination and
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show
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some
detrimental consequences of this
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trend
.
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People
, who read these facts would
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change
their mind towards women and discard this traditional stereotype.
On the other hand
, the major drawback of the impacts of
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newspapers
could be that
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people
could have mistaken
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ideas
if they read up on the misleading reports such as the
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exageration
about crime scenes could cause frustration among readers.

In conclusion
, the key reason for the
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trend
that
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newspapers
have the great influences on
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people&
#039; s
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ideas
and opinions
as well
as the
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positive
and
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negative
sides of this
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trend
are evident.
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IELTS essay Newspapers have great influence on people’s opinions and ideas. What are the reasons of the phenomenon and analyze the positive and negative effects of the phenomenon. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
344 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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