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Politician's private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.3

Politician's private lives should not be published in newspapers. v. 3
With the advancement in technology, anyone's private life can be published in a newspaper. I agree that politician’s lives should not be published in newspapers or any other medium no matter what the story is. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss both scenarios on this serious issue. Politicians private lives should not be discussed no matter how bad or good they are. Discussing someone's private life can be taken as a very personal matter and there are no benefits in discussing someone's life instead it backfires many times in terms of different controversies. For example, In first world countries, It is banned to publish any politician or celebrity life in the newspaper or any other medium to give them total control on their private life. Furthermore, If it is published in the newspaper, then there might be some consequences. However, publishing the private life will demoralize the victim who is working day and night for the country resulting the resignation from the duty. For example, In Pakistan once there was a general who was very obedient to his country, but once his private life get published in the electronic media and other mediums resulting his resignation from the services right away. To sum up, I believe it is better to avoid publishing anyone private lives on electronic media or any other medium either they are a politician or not. Despite the awareness and protection of this cause some media will still showcase politician’s private life to increase their channel views and ratings.
With the advancement in technology, anyone's
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can
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newspaper
. I
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politician’s
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should not
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newspapers
or any
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other
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medium
no matter what the story is. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss both scenarios on this serious issue.

Politicians
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private
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lives
should not
be discussed
no matter how
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bad
or
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good
they are. Discussing someone's
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private
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life
can
be taken
as a
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very
personal matter and there are no benefits in discussing someone's
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life
instead
it backfires
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many
times in terms of
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different
controversies.
For example
, In
first
world countries, It
is banned
to publish any
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politician
or celebrity
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life
in the
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newspaper
or any
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other
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medium
to give them total control on their
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private
life.

Furthermore
, If it
is published
in the
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newspaper
, then there might be
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some
consequences.
However
, publishing the
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private
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life
will demoralize the victim who is working day and night for the country resulting the resignation from the duty.
For example
, In Pakistan once there was a general who was
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very
obedient to his country,
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but
once his
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private
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life
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get
published in the electronic media and
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other
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mediums
resulting his resignation from the services right away.

To sum up, I believe it is better to avoid publishing anyone
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private
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
on electronic media or any
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other
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medium
either they are a
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politician
or not. Despite the awareness and protection of this cause
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some
media will
still
showcase
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politician’s
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private
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life
to increase their channel views and ratings.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
31Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Politician's private lives should not be published in newspapers. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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