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Many people believe in the idea of school children wearing a school uniform, but should teachers as well be required to conform to a dress code? v.1

Many people believe in the idea of school children wearing a school uniform, but should teachers as well be required to conform to a dress code? v. 1
The wearing of educational uniforms is an issue that is both supported and opposed by many people. Numerous institutions around the world require students to wear university uniforms on their grounds, however, teachers are not often required to wear a specific cloth while working. It has therefore been suggested that it should be compulsory for teachers to wear a specific shits or follow a specific uniform on a daily basis. One reason for introducing a same cloth for teachers would be that teachers typically function as role models. For students who are not willing to conform to the dress code of their school, it would be beneficial to see figures of authority wearing the same outfit as each other, and they would then potentially be more willing to follow their own dress code. Another reason for introducing a compulsory dress code for teachers would be that if all teachers wore the same outfit, there would be no visible difference amongst them. Naturally, some teachers are wealthier than others and would tend to show this through their clothing. This could cause other teachers to feel inferior and therefore could result in lower quality work and decreased motivation. Furthermore, students would feel treated more fairly, if not only they, but teachers as well had to wear a certain uniform in school. In conclusion, uniforms for teachers would enable students and other teachers to easily distinguish between school staff and other adults. In many schools there is no high quality security system and strangers can easily enter and steal something or commit other crimes. If teachers wore uniforms, one would then be able to approach and confront strangers more easily, as one could distinguish teachers wearing uniforms clearly from other adults.
The wearing of educational
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is an issue
that is
both supported and opposed by
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many
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people
. Numerous institutions around the world require
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students
to
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wear
university
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uniforms
on their grounds,
however
,
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teachers
are not
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often
required to
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wear
a specific cloth while working. It has
therefore
been suggested
that it should be compulsory for
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teachers
to
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wear
a specific
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shits
or follow a specific
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uniform
on a daily basis.

One reason for introducing a same cloth for
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teachers
would be that
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teachers
typically
function as role models. For
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students
who are not willing to conform to the dress code of their school, it would be beneficial to
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see
figures of authority wearing the same outfit as each
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other
, and they would then
potentially
be more willing to follow their
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own
dress code.

Another reason for introducing a compulsory dress code for
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teachers
would be that if all
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teachers
wore the same outfit, there would be no visible difference amongst them.
Naturally
,
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some
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teachers
are wealthier than others and would tend to
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show
this through their clothing. This could cause
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other
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teachers
to feel inferior and
therefore
could result in lower quality work and decreased motivation.
Furthermore
,
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students
would feel treated more
fairly
, if not
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only
they,
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but
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teachers
as well
had to
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wear
a certain
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uniform
in school.

In conclusion
,
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uniforms
for
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teachers
would enable
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students
and
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other
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teachers
to
easily
distinguish between school staff and
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other
adults. In
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many
schools there is no high quality security system and strangers can
easily
enter and steal something or commit
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other
crimes. If
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teachers
wore
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uniforms
, one would then be able to approach and confront strangers more
easily
, as one could distinguish
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teachers
wearing
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uniforms
clearly
from
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other
adults.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
34Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS essay Many people believe in the idea of school children wearing a school uniform, but should teachers as well be required to conform to a dress code? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
288 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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