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Policy for Vehicles on CampusVehicles parked on campus by students, faculty, or staff must be registered with the Campus Police Department. Parking permits are required for both part-time and full-time students. Permits may be purchased at the Campus Poli v.1

Policy for Vehicles on CampusVehicles parked on campus by students, faculty, or staff must be registered with the Campus Police Department. Parking permits are required for both part-time and full-time students. Permits may be purchased at the Campus Poli v. 1
Nowadays, every company wants to aware people about their products in order survive in this competitive world. They spend a lot of money on publicity rather than improving their goods. However, some firms are very popular for their standards, but still they sell their items by using costly pamphlets, visual ads and many more things like this. I sternly agree that such ads are meant for entertaining purpose because they do not require any kind of publicity as they are more famous for their quality items. Certainly, the only purpose of every brand is to sell their manufactured goods. But in today`s world to maintain their standards, they utilise many steps so that they do not lack behind the other competitors. To remain in the race of each and every part of the business, they spend an ample amount of money. Sometimes it is not required, but still to cover the risks, they take the help of certain methods like advertisements. Furthermore, some firms have very good social relationships and popular with their useful products, but instead of all this, they utilise many marketing techniques which is just a wastage of time and labour. This time of planning should be utilised to improve the quality of things, consequently people get more attracted towards high quality things and this will increase the overall economy of the companies. Moreover, some standard industries do not need any advertisements but they make it, therefore, in this case, these types of steps seem that they for entertainment because steps without meaningful purposes are meaningless. So, marketing departments of every firm must use their resources in a controlled manner rather in loose ways. To conclude, every industry should not use the available finances for insignificant requirements rather they can use that for other necessary things like helping people, improving standards of the firm and for social purposes. Sagacious approach is necessary for holistic growth of society.
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people
about their products in order survive in this competitive world. They spend
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a lot of
money on publicity
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goods
.
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standards
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but
still
they sell their items by using costly pamphlets, visual ads and
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more things like this. I
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because
they do not require any kind of publicity as they are more
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famous
for their quality items.

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only
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purpose
of every brand is to sell their manufactured
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goods
.
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in
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many
steps
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that they do not lack behind the other competitors. To remain in the race of each and every part of the business, they spend an ample amount of money.
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but
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, they take the
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help
of certain methods like advertisements.

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have
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very
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good
social relationships and popular with their useful products,
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but
instead
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utilise
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many
marketing techniques which is
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a wastage of time and
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labour
. This time of planning should be
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utilised
to
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improve
the quality of things,
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people
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get
more attracted towards high quality things and this will increase the
overall
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companies
.

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,
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standard
industries do not need any advertisements
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they
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steps without meaningful
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purposes
are meaningless.
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, marketing departments of every
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firm
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must
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use
their resources in a controlled manner
rather
in loose ways.

To conclude
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use
the available finances for insignificant requirements
rather
they can
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use
that for other necessary things like helping
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people
, improving
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standards
of the
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firm
and for social
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purposes
. Sagacious approach is necessary for holistic growth of society.
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IELTS essay Policy for Vehicles on CampusVehicles parked on campus by students, faculty, or staff must be registered with the Campus Police Department. Parking permits are required for both part-time and full-time students. Permits may be purchased at the Campus Poli v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
320 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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