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Plastic shopping bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.4

Plastic shopping bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned. v. 4
In today' s modern world, the environmental crisis in which we live has become a major concern for our society. It is undeniable that plastic goods are the main reason for this situation, thus a part of the population believes that the prohibition of plastic shopping bag is a necessary action to stop many environmental problems. Personally, I completely agree with this statement and this essay will discuss several reasons and provide examples supporting my idea. To begin, the first reason for the need for banning plastic bags is the fact that they are dangerous for wildlife. To explain that, their light weight can make them travel all around the world and their appearance and shape can confuse several creatures which may consider them as their food. For example, almost 1. 000 sea turtles find death eating white bags because they think that they are jellyfishes. Thus, the importance of minimizing the use of plastic bags is vital. To continue, another reason is the fact that there are better alternatives available nowadays. Reusable bags have become a trend in the last 5 years. The image of people entering superstores holding them is very common since most of these bags can last for 3 years, in contrast with normal plastic bags. So, it is apparent that plastic bags will be obsolete in a few years. To conclude, my opinion is that there is no place for plastic bags in the 21st century. Up until now, they had a devastating impact on the planet, however, has started to be reversed by a part of the population.
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is a necessary action to
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environmental problems.
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reason
for the need for banning
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plastic
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is the fact that they are
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dangerous
for wildlife. To
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them travel all around the world and their appearance and shape can confuse several creatures which may consider them as their food.
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, almost 1. 000 sea turtles find death eating white
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bags
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because
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that they are jellyfishes.
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bags
is vital.

To continue, another
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reason
is the fact that there are better alternatives available nowadays. Reusable
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bags
have become a trend in the last 5 years. The image of
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people
entering superstores holding them is
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very
common since most of these
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bags
can last for 3 years,
in contrast
with normal
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plastic
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bags
.
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So
, it is apparent that
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plastic
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bags
will be obsolete in a few years.

To conclude
, my opinion is that there is no place for
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plastic
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bags
in the 21st century. Up until
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now
, they had a devastating impact on the planet,
however
, has
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started
to
be reversed
by a part of the population.
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IELTS essay Plastic shopping bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned. v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
264 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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