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People who live in large cities face a range of problems in their daily life. What are the main problems people in cities face, and how can these problems be tackled? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.3

People who live in large cities face a range of problems in their daily life. What are the main problems people in cities face, and how can these problems be tackled? v. 3
Nowadays, more and more people are migrating to the big cities to live. Despite having development opportunities, people have to deal with many issues in their daily life. This essay will discuss the problems and reach solutions to tackle them. Firstly, it is clear that the common problem facing residents is overcrowded. Residential crowding is perhaps the defining feature of any large city. Chicago’s population density, for instance, exceeds 12, 200 persons per square mile. Thus, some research finds that crowding produces higher levels of stress, depression, aggression and crime. The solution for the government to limit the migration of people to big cities is focus on expanding and developing small cities. Another problem of city life is traffic gridlock. It occur due to the sheer volume of traffic and the sheer number of intersections controlled by traffic lights or stop signs. The consequence is to wastes both time and fuel. According to TTI, traffic jam wastes 4. 8 billion hours and 1. 9 billion gallons of gasoline annually, an amount that would fill more than 200, 000 gasoline tank trucks. Not to mention that air pollution that traffic creates pollution from vehicles’ exhaust, factories and other enterprises that also pollute. As a result, air quality in cities is substandard. This poor air quality has significant health consequences, as it produces higher rates of respiratory and heart disease and higher mortality rates. To solve this issues, the government have to enhance infrastructure investment, cut the number of vehicles on the road and encourages residents should use public transports instead of private transports. In conclusion, despite facing a range of problems in large cities, there are many solutions that governments could consider and apply. Therefore, it is hoped that the quality of life in big cities will get better.
Nowadays, more and more
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people
are migrating to the
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big
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cities
to
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live
. Despite having development opportunities,
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people
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have to
deal with
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many
issues in their daily life. This essay will discuss the
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problems
and reach solutions to tackle them.

Firstly
, it is
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clear
that the common
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problem
facing residents
is overcrowded
. Residential crowding is perhaps the defining feature of any large city. Chicago’s population density,
for instance
, exceeds 12, 200 persons per square mile.
Thus
,
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some
research finds that crowding produces higher levels of
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stress
, depression, aggression and crime. The solution for the
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government
to limit the migration of
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people
to
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big
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cities
is focus on expanding and developing
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small
cities.

Another
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problem
of city life is
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traffic
gridlock. It
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occur
due to the sheer volume of
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traffic
and the sheer number of intersections controlled by
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traffic
lights or
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stop
signs. The consequence is to wastes both time and fuel. According to TTI,
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traffic
jam wastes 4. 8 billion hours and 1. 9 billion gallons of gasoline
annually
, an amount that would fill more than 200, 000 gasoline tank trucks. Not to mention that air pollution that
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traffic
creates pollution from vehicles’ exhaust, factories and other enterprises that
also
pollute.
As a result
, air quality in
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cities
is substandard. This poor air quality has significant health consequences, as it produces higher rates of respiratory and heart disease and higher mortality rates. To solve this issues, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
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have to
enhance infrastructure investment,
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cut
the number of vehicles on the road and encourages residents should
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use
public transports
instead
of private transports.

In conclusion
, despite facing a range of
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problems
in large
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cities
, there are
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many
solutions that
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governments
could consider and apply.
Therefore
, it
is hoped
that the quality of life in
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big
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cities
will
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get
better.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay People who live in large cities face a range of problems in their daily life. What are the main problems people in cities face, and how can these problems be tackled? v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
298 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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