Adolescence has always been a tough stage to go through. However, some people believe the current teenage population are facing numerous problems due to the excessive engagement of their parents at work as compared to before. In my opinion, I fully agree that young adults encounter problems more frequently these days because of the diminishing amounts of time their parents spend with them.
The diminishing parental guidance force adolescents seek assistance elsewhere, whenever they encounter any problem. However, these pieces of advice they get usually aggravate their existing issues or even create several others. For instance, around 30 % of the USA teenagers resided to take the advice of online friends in case of any difficulty they have rather than introducing the issue to their family mainly because no family member was available to guide them through. The lack of parental supervision over our offspring at such critical phase of their lives, set them to a dangerous pass of countless uncertainties.
In addition, parents are usually exhausted to spend quality time with their families. They would barely have enough time to rest and energies for the next workday, which considerably compromise their ability to develop a better understanding of the needs of their family members. Yet, during the crucial teenage years, the youngsters require more focus and passionate guidance from their families. If parents cannot balance between their career commitments and the increasing demands of their growing youngsters, their families will suffer.
To conclude, teenage years are difficult and dictate proper management by parents, but if this did not happen, teenagers would suffer and would be led to more troubles.
Adolescence has always been a tough stage to go through.
However
,
some
people
believe the
current
teenage population are facing numerous problems due to the excessive engagement of their
parents
at work as compared to
before
. In my opinion, I
fully
agree
that young adults encounter problems more
frequently
these days
because
of the diminishing amounts of time their
parents
spend with them.
The diminishing parental guidance force adolescents seek assistance elsewhere, whenever they encounter any problem.
However
, these pieces of advice they
get
usually
aggravate their existing issues or even create several others.
For instance
, around 30 % of the USA
teenagers
resided to take the advice of online friends in case of any difficulty they have
rather
than introducing the issue to their
family
mainly
because
no
family
member was available to guide them through. The lack of parental supervision over our offspring at such critical phase of their
lives
, set them to a
dangerous
pass of countless uncertainties.
In addition
,
parents
are
usually
exhausted to spend quality time with their
families
. They would
barely
have
enough
time to rest and energies for the
next
workday, which
considerably
compromise their ability to develop a better understanding of the needs of their
family
members.
Yet
, during the crucial teenage years, the youngsters require more focus and passionate guidance from their
families
. If
parents
cannot balance between their career commitments and the increasing demands of their growing youngsters, their
families
will suffer.
To conclude
, teenage years are difficult and dictate proper management by
parents
,
but
if this did not happen,
teenagers
would suffer and would
be led
to more troubles.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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