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People today generally have better lives than people in the past did. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.3

It is true that nowadays life became more convenient for humans rather than the past. I completely agree with this statement due to modern world's atmosphere, economic progress and developed medicine. To begin with, there are certain reasons for betterment of lifehood, which also have beneficial circumstances for humans. Firstly, since the opportunaties of country increased because of economic progress, government can give more support to citizens. To illustrate, if one feel shortage which related with finance, he might get assistance from authority and can solve his issue. Secondly, every specialization has been developing for several period of time as well as medical field, which also have a great positive impact on individual's live condition. Since, scientists found many treatments for fatal diseases, such as plague, smallpox or heart ailments, person's life become more safer. Finally, the advances in technology consider benefical for well-being life. It create chance for people to accomplish houseworks easily and quickly and even some technological devices actualize works without human labor. For instance, laundry, cooking, cleaning-such ordinary life works-as well as manufacturing which is doing by people hands in the past. In conclusion, this is my view that medicine, technology and development have influences to improve life condition
It is true that nowadays
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life
became more convenient for humans
rather
than the past. I completely
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agree
with this statement due to modern world's atmosphere, economic progress and developed medicine. To
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begin
with, there are certain reasons for betterment of
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lifehood
, which
also
have beneficial circumstances for humans.
Firstly
, since the
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opportunaties
of country increased
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because
of economic progress,
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government
can give more support to citizens. To illustrate, if one feel shortage which related with finance, he might
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get
assistance from authority and can solve his issue.
Secondly
, every specialization has been developing for several period of time
as well
as medical field, which
also
have a great
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positive
impact on individual's
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live
condition. Since, scientists found
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many
treatments for fatal diseases, such as plague, smallpox or heart ailments, person's
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life
become
Use only “safer” (without ‘more’) when you use the comparative.
more safer
.
Finally
, the advances in technology consider
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benefical
for well-being
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life
. It
After ‘It’, use the third-person verb form “creates”.
create
chance for
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people
to accomplish
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houseworks
easily
and
quickly
and even
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some
technological devices actualize works without human labor.
For instance
, laundry, cooking, cleaning-such ordinary
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life
works-
as well
as manufacturing which is doing by
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people
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hands
in the past.
In conclusion
, this is my view that medicine, technology and development have influences to
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improve
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life
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condition
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IELTS essay People today generally have better lives than people in the past did

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
202 words
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