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People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less? What effects does it have on individual and on society. v.6

The number of people argue that they have problems of getting through sufficient sleep. There are different deficiency due to the trouble of doze. Nap played a vital role in our life and assuage us from our daily routine. Of course, I agree this point of view that nowadays persons have theoretical issues which not allow him to take quiet rest. Several people are working like a machine to establish their living standard as well as compete their life with this materialist world. Moreover, many person try to achieve all the goals according to their coveted. And the result is that they are too hard to their self that neither worried about their health and relation. While, on the other hand, there are adequate conception if we work on it we can easily get proper sleep. Firstly, if we can relax our mind from stress and tension consequently, we get beauty sleep. For example, if I recall my memories I remember since, 2004 I had to complete my graduation and for that purpose I wake up till whole night I studied but, in the morning time I felt butterfly in my stomach because I perceive due to lack of sleep I am not able to clear my exam. Making our self-calm and secondly confidence on yourself is a primarily concern to have nightmare. As per above discussion, in my opinion health has an important place in our life if, medically we are not fit than no use rather how much rich or star you are in the world. Sluggish remove your tiredness help you to be more active and energetic in your work.
The number of
people
argue
that they have problems of getting through sufficient
sleep
. There are
different
deficiency
due to the trouble of doze. Nap played a vital role in our life and assuage us from our daily routine.

Of course
, I
agree
this point of view that nowadays persons have theoretical issues which not
allow
him to take quiet rest. Several
people
are working like a machine to establish their living standard
as well
as compete their life with this materialist world.
Moreover
,
many
person try to achieve all the goals according to their coveted. And the result is that they are too
hard
to their self that neither worried about their health and relation.

While,
on the other hand
, there are adequate conception if we work on
it
we can
easily
get
proper
sleep
.
Firstly
, if we can relax our mind from
stress
and tension
consequently
, we
get
beauty
sleep
.
For example
, if I recall my memories I remember since, 2004 I had to complete my graduation and for that purpose I wake up till whole night I studied
but
, in the morning time I felt butterfly in my stomach
because
I perceive due to lack of
sleep
I am not able to
clear
my exam. Making our self-calm and
secondly
confidence on yourself is a
primarily concern
to have nightmare.

As per above discussion, in my opinion health has an
important
place in our life if,
medically
we are not
fit than
no
use
rather
how much rich or star you are in the world. Sluggish remove your tiredness
help
you to be more active and energetic in your work.
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IELTS essay Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. *What problems can lack of sleep cause? *What can be done about lack of sleep?

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