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People should only read those books that are about real events, real people and established facts. Do you agree or disagree? v.1

People should only read those books that are about real events, real people and established facts. v. 1
Since the dawn of civilization, different skills such as writing, reading and so forth, have played a significant role in individual ways of living. As a matter of fact, they are essence of life and hardly ever can people progress in their lives without reading, writing or even other necessary skills. Stemming from this fact, a relevant question that is a moot point is whether people should only read those books related to factual events or not. Due to controversial nature of this question there is not a general argument on this issue. I am, however, to a great extent of the conviction that reading about fact events not only can provide an opportunity for people to view life differently but also can motivate them to carry out their works based on real events. In the ensuing paragraphs some convincing reasons will be delineated to elaborate my personal stance. To commence with, vast majorities of people looking for extra information through various ways in order to enhance their knowledge in different realm. Generally speaking, it goes without saying that books are of the utmost important ways to improve knowledge or experience because they are including wide variety of subjects, which can provide fertile ground for people to reach their goals. As far as I am concerned, myriads of books contain different type of topics such as established facts, myth, novel, and so forth. Indeed, myriads of books are story and do not refer to real events. In this case, they might have deleterious effects on people' s lives. For instance, it might enhance the likelihood of not making a sound decision due to the fact that those books have written based on unreal situation. To elucidate more on this issue, books with content of real results would have positive impact on individuals' way of living and make people decide their path. Researches have shown that crowds of people who read books with real events subjects, have been more successful rather ones who read all subjects. Another reason that cannot go unnoticed is that if people rely on real facts, we will not soon witness a literate society. To put it in general word, it is established beyond doubt that events closer to reality can terminate into a enrich society. Indeed, it can alter costumes and tradition in the society which are not useful for people. Going into the depth, books with real events can put a society into its highest level owing to the fact that a plethora of people are interested in real facts. Indeed, not until books disperse established and real facts can the society progress. However, what was alluded to above can' t be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the countless merits it has, indisputably, if people just take books about real events into consideration, it will not increase creativity among human beings. Additionally, it will not challenge our system of beliefs. Nonetheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale. In light of the reasons elaborated, I reiterate that reading books in every field can provide an opportunity for people to enhance their knowledge and become saturated with wide variety of subjects. In fact, reading books about real events allow people to view life differently and become self-sufficient person. In addition, real facts could contribute greatly to the development of society due to the fact that people can get inform of many thing happen in the society.
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forth, have played a significant role in individual
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of living. As a matter of
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, they are essence of life and hardly ever can
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people
progress in their
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without
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people
should
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read those
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books
related to factual
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or not. Due to controversial nature of this question there is not a general argument on this issue. I am,
however
, to a great extent of the conviction that
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reading
about
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not
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can provide an opportunity for
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people
to view life
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also
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real
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. In the ensuing paragraphs
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convincing reasons will
be delineated
to elaborate my personal stance.

To commence with, vast majorities of
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people
looking for extra information through various
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ways
in order to enhance their knowledge in
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different
realm.
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speaking, it goes without saying that
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books
are of the utmost
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important
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ways
to
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improve
knowledge or experience
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because
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people
to reach their goals. As far as I
am concerned
, myriads of
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contain
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type of topics such as established facts, myth, novel, and
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forth.
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, myriads of
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are story and do not refer to
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.
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, they might have deleterious effects on
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.
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fact
that those
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books
have written based on unreal situation. To elucidate more on this issue,
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books
with content of
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real
results would have
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positive
impact on
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individuals&
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make
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people
decide their path. Researches have shown that crowds of
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people
who read
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books
with
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events
subjects, have been more successful
rather
ones who read all subjects.

Another reason that cannot go unnoticed is that if
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rely on
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real
facts, we will not
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soon
witness a literate
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society
. To put it
in general
word, it
is established
beyond doubt that
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events
closer to reality can terminate into
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enrich
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society
.
Indeed
, it can alter costumes and tradition in the
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society
which are not useful for
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people
. Going into the depth,
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books
with
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real
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events
can put a
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society
into its highest level owing to the
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fact
that a plethora of
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people
are interested
in
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real
facts.
Indeed
, not until
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books
disperse established and
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real
facts can the
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society
progress.
However
, what
was alluded
to above
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people
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take
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books
about
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into consideration, it will not increase creativity among human beings.
Additionally
, it will not challenge our system of beliefs. Nonetheless, it does not
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make
those preceding benefits pale.

In light of the reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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reading
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books
in every field can provide an opportunity for
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people
to enhance their knowledge and become saturated with wide variety of subjects. In
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fact
,
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reading
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books
about
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events
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people
to view life
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and become self-sufficient person.
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addition,
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real
facts could contribute
greatly
to the development of
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society
due to the
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that
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70Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS essay People should only read those books that are about real events, real people and established facts. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
572 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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