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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should read only those books that are about real events l, real people, and established facts. Use specific and details to support your opinion. v.19

People should read only those books that are about real events l, real people, and established facts. Use specific and details to support your opinion. v. 19
These days, reading is the best way to improve knowledge and overcome from several issues. It is considered by some that people need read only true books which are based on real events, real story of people, and facts of establishment. However, i totally disagree with this opinion and believe that individuals can read story, self- improvement and business book. First of all, i believe that people should read real story and improving self books because these books are important rather than fact based books. In other words, in this contemporary world lots of people are busier in their lifestyles so there is no one left to people to guide them that how to improve self. In result, they have to read from book thay what are the exercises play role to be healthy as well as they help to creat routine schedule. To illustrate, nowadays millions of people have been reading storybooks such as harry potter, which helps them to get relief stress and make them relaxed. For these reasons, i think that story and self-motivation books are essential instead of fact relevants book. Secondly, growing competition in the market books about businesses have become prominent around the world in which individuals would achieve business ideas along with experts experience. So that, having owner of company, and even employee might be helped to being future well-known businessman. For instance, researchers have proven that reading business books uphold people to improvement in thier companies or factories. Therefore, business related books are vital for people. To conclude, fiction and self-improvement books have being significantly crucial. In my opinion, people would become more aware of current generation by reading these books than old facts book.
These days,
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reading
is the best way to
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improve
knowledge and overcome from several issues. It
is considered
by
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some
that
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people
need
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read
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only
true
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books
which
are based
on real
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events
, real
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story
of
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people
, and facts of establishment.
However
,
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i
totally
disagree with this opinion and believe that individuals can
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read
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story
, self- improvement and
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business
book.

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First of all
,
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i
believe that
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people
should
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read
real
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story
and improving self
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books
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because
these
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books
are
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important
rather
than
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fact
based
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books
.
In other words
, in this contemporary world lots of
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people
are busier in their lifestyles
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so
there is no one
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left
to
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people
to guide them that how to
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improve
self. In result, they
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have to
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read
from
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book
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thay
what are the exercises play role to be healthy
as well
as they
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help
to
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creat
routine schedule. To illustrate, nowadays millions of
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people
have been
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reading
storybooks such as
If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.
harry potter
, which
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helps
them to
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get
relief
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stress
and
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make
them relaxed. For these reasons,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
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think
that
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story
and self-motivation
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books
are essential
instead
of
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fact
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relevants
book.

Secondly
, growing competition in the market
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books
about
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businesses
have become prominent around the world in which individuals would achieve
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business
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ideas
along with experts experience.
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So
that, having owner of
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company
, and even employee might be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
to being future well-known businessman.
For instance
, researchers have proven that
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reading
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business
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books
uphold
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people
to improvement in
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thier
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companies
or factories.
Therefore
,
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business
related
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books
are vital for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.

To conclude
, fiction and self-improvement
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books
have being
significantly
crucial. In my opinion,
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people
would become more aware of
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current
generation by
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reading
these
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books
than
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old
facts
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book
.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
39Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes
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Samuel Johnson

IELTS essay People should read only those books that are about real events l, real people, and established facts. Use specific and details to support your opinion. v. 19

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
283 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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