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People should read only those books that are about real events, real people and established facts. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? v.2

People should read only those books that are about real events, real people and established facts. v. 2
Societies are made to follow to refer only those editions, which exhibit events that took place during the previous era, autobiography of the people and facts, which are followed all over the world. In my opinion, I agree that, the belief of only referring nonfiction books is better when compared to fiction stories. However, I believe that, literature and imaginative narrations play an important role in human life. This essay will discuss about my opinions and ideas regarding exposition. On the one hand, A person grows up into an adult with a dream and the goal in mind to become an engineer, a doctor, or other, which is possible with the help of motivation and encouragement, that are most often received from the family. Apart from that, motivational stories, and life story of legendary leaders plays a major act in shaping one's style of living. For example, a motivational speaker agrees that, most of the toddlers under the age of 10 and 15, follows the steps of their parents and ancestors, and start the same profession which their ancestors have successfully performed. On the other hand, while inclination towards facts helps communities develop into a better community, narrative stories also have an important role in public life, which helps in social movement, and also move along with current trends. For instance, it is believed by many that, fiction stories are stronger than nonfiction stories, which support an individual to bring up with innovative ides beneficial to the colony. Finally, in conclusion, I can conclude that, though many back the idea of following essay of real persons as a perfect example, fiction also portray important role in shaping a human life and also in developing locality into a better neighbourhood.
Societies
are made
to follow to refer
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only
those editions, which exhibit
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events
that took place during the previous era, autobiography of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
and facts, which
are followed
all over the world. In my opinion, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
that, the belief of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
referring nonfiction books is better when compared to fiction
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stories
.
However
, I believe that, literature and imaginative narrations play an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
role in human
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
. This essay will
Did you mean simply "discuss my"? You do not need the word "about" here.
discuss about my
opinions and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
regarding exposition.

On the one hand, A person grows up into an adult with a dream and the goal in mind to become an engineer, a doctor, or other, which is possible with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of motivation and encouragement, that are most
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
received from the family. Apart from that, motivational
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stories
, and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
story
of legendary leaders plays a major act in shaping one's style of living.
For example
, a motivational speaker
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agrees
that, most of the toddlers under the age of 10 and 15, follows the steps of their parents and ancestors, and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
the same profession which their ancestors have
successfully
performed.

On the other hand
, while inclination towards facts
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
communities develop into a better community, narrative
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stories
also
have an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
role in public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
, which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
in social movement, and
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
along with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
trends.
For instance
, it
is believed
by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
that, fiction
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stories
are stronger than nonfiction
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stories
, which support an individual to bring up with innovative ides beneficial to the colony.

Finally
,
in conclusion
, I can conclude that, though
Possible agreement error. The noun back seems to be countable; consider using: "many backs".
many back
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
of following essay of real persons as a perfect example, fiction
also
portray
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
role in shaping a human
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
and
also
in developing locality into a better
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neighbourhood
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay People should read only those books that are about real events, real people and established facts. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
289 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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