People in the community can buy cheaper product nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? v.2
People in the community can buy cheaper product nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? v. 2
Nowadays, production’s price is becoming lower than before. While there are some idead against this phenomenal, in my opinion, I suggest it brings about more benefits than drawbacks.
The reduction in the cost cause some disadvantages. Price usually comes with quality. As the result, cheaper productions means it has low quality. For example, to manufacture cheap iteams, producers have to remove some parts of the productions or use cheaper ingredients in order to lower the price. This will cause the sale items to be in trouble: they may breakdown sooner than expected or even break down and endanger customers.
However, the falling of production price benefits people in various ways. As the price goes down, more customer will be attracted to it, which boost the consumption. On the big scene, the boost prompts the development of the production, and eventually it helps the economic rise. For example, a decades ago in Vietnam, car price was relatively high due to the import price and there was a domestic car enterprise. Recently, with the transfer technology from foreign companies, Vietnamese factories are able to produce domestic care, which results in the reduction of car price. More people have bought domestic cars, which contributes to the GDP of the nation. In addition, people are able to buy appliance hich is considered luxury in the past, thanks to the low price. Ten years ago, in Vietnam, a student owns a laptop is rarely seen. Nowsadays, almost Vietnamese students have their own laptop. This trend help people to have higher living standard and in a further view, better life.
In conclusion, despite of the disadvantages, the fact that people can buy cheaper products nowadays has a good impact on our lives.
Nowadays,
production’s
price
is becoming lower than
before
. While there are
some
idead
against this phenomenal, in my opinion, I suggest it brings about more benefits than drawbacks.
The reduction in the cost cause
some
disadvantages.
Price
usually
comes
with quality. As the result, cheaper
productions
means it has low quality.
For example
, to manufacture
cheap
iteams
, producers
have to
remove
some
parts of the
productions
or
use
cheaper ingredients in order to lower the
price
. This will cause the sale items to be in trouble: they may breakdown sooner than
expected
or even break down and endanger customers.
However
, the falling of
production
price
benefits
people
in various ways. As the
price
goes down, more customer will
be attracted
to it, which boost the consumption. On the
big
scene, the boost prompts the development of the
production
, and
eventually
it
helps
the economic rise.
For example
,
a decades
ago in Vietnam,
car
price
was
relatively
high due to the import
price
and there was a domestic
car
enterprise. Recently, with the transfer technology from foreign
companies
, Vietnamese factories are able to produce domestic care, which results in the reduction of
car
price
. More
people
have
bought
domestic
cars
, which contributes to the GDP of the nation.
In addition
,
people
are able to
buy
appliance
hich
is considered
luxury in the past, thanks to the low
price
. Ten years ago, in Vietnam, a student
owns
a laptop is rarely
seen
.
Nowsadays
, almost Vietnamese students have their
own
laptop. This trend
help
people
to have higher living standard and in a
further
view, better life.
In conclusion
,
despite of
the disadvantages, the fact that
people
can
buy
cheaper products nowadays has a
good
impact on our
lives
.
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