People have various ways of relieving stress. What are some of the ways that you find most effective in relieving stress? Give reasons and examples to support your response. v.1
People have various ways of relieving stress. What are some of the ways that you find most effective in relieving stress? Give reasons and examples to support your response. v. 1
It is a general argument that people nowadays should be married before they reach the age of thirty as this is best both for their career and for the society. Personally, being engaged at that age is the suitable and perfect time for us to think about growing up our next generation.
At first, let regard to the positive aspect of the statement. For instance, some people seem unwelcome to marry. Learning, working and building career are their most important goals. If they are forced to marry when they are in a progress to make a better life, they will probably be frustrated, it may impact to their career or even bring them down.
However, making a family before the transition age could be a good choice. People in 30 tend to think about what they have done and sometimes worried about their future. But if they already had a family, the worries would not be a problem. The spouse of Barack Obama, a former president of the USA, is a good example for family supporting.
Furthermore, being at the middle age means we are in charge of our behaviours. When people are consciously responsible for the family, obviously domestic violence would be reduced. In consequence, children could have more chances to grow up in a good family. It is either best for the individual or for the society.
In addition, it is up to everyone to engage sooner or after they are thirty. But before getting married, people should have a deep consideration and prepare for the family they will have.
It is a general argument that
people
nowadays should
be married
before
they reach the
age
of thirty as this is best both for their career and for the society.
Personally
,
being engaged
at that
age
is the suitable and perfect time for us to
think
about growing up our
next
generation.
At
first
,
let
regard to the
positive
aspect of the statement.
For instance
,
some
people
seem unwelcome to marry. Learning, working and building career are their most
important
goals. If they
are forced
to marry when they are in a progress to
make
a better life, they will
probably
be frustrated
, it may impact to their career or even bring them down.
However
, making a
family
before
the transition
age
could be a
good
choice.
People
in 30 tend to
think
about what they have done and
sometimes
worried about their future.
But
if they already had a
family
, the worries would not be a problem. The spouse of Barack Obama, a former president of the USA, is a
good
example for
family
supporting.
Furthermore
, being at the middle
age
means we are in charge of our
behaviours
. When
people
are
consciously
responsible for the
family
,
obviously
domestic violence would be
reduced
. In consequence, children could have more chances to grow up in a
good
family
. It is either best for the individual or for the society.
In addition
, it is up to everyone to engage sooner or after they are thirty.
But
before
getting married,
people
should have a deep consideration and prepare for the
family
they will have.
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