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People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an audience. Do you think public speaking skill is really important? Give reasons. v.7

People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an audience. Do you think public speaking skill is really important? Give reasons. v. 7
There is an increase in a number of conferences and seminars around the world. Majority of people, therefore, will participate and also give a speech I front of other people. Some people advocate the idea that speaking in front of other people would be a cumbersome task, while others dismiss them as they believe that with proper skills it is not very hard. I believe that with proper skills, speaking in front of others would be easy. The most rational justification is that individuals are able to be trained to speak in public. That is to say, there are thousands of videos and articles available online which show how to manage and control the stress when speak in conferences. If people watched these videos, the benefits accruing from those would have a far-reaching positive impact on their future speech. There are numerous success stories available which demonstrate how powerful these skills are. Yet another compelling reason against the usage of proper resources to gain more skills is that other methods did not successful enough. To put it differently, there are some individuals who use some special drugs which would reduce the stress. But based on the new research results, not only they are not helpful, but also would cause more serious and perennial problems such as anxiousness, insomnia, and etc. To sum up, I am of the opinion that the only way to give a good presentation in front of public would be to use proper skills. If people were to seek for other ways, this, eventually, would take its toll on their normal lives. Thus, to be on a safe side and avoid serious repercussions, the best way to have a proper speech is to have a proper skill which will boost individuals’ confidence.
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be trained
to speak in public.
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to say, there are thousands of videos and articles available online which
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show
how to manage and control the
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stress
when speak in conferences. If
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people
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watched
these videos, the benefits accruing from those would have a far-reaching
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positive
impact on their future speech. There are numerous success stories available which demonstrate how powerful these
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skills
are.

Yet
another compelling reason against the usage of
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proper
resources to gain more
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skills
is that
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other
methods did not successful
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enough
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individuals who
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stress
.
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front
of public would be to
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use
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proper
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skills
. If
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people
were to seek for
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other
ways, this,
eventually
, would take its toll on their normal
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lives
.
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proper
speech is to have a
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proper
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skill
which will boost individuals’ confidence.
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IELTS essay People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an audience. Do you think public speaking skill is really important? Give reasons. v. 7

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
295 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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