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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. discuss both these views and give your own opinion. v.17

Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. v. 17
Universal truth that friend is blessing for us. Someone vibe that friends always same idea agrees and other contemplate that good friends are something against unsuitable opinions. This essay will discuss both in details and why good mate is disagree some time. On the one hand, friends are not only for time passing, but also, they are doing many good activities. Most of the success from unity with friends such as first business concept, travel plan and other jobs. Addition, if we work same mentally people, then they goal achieves easier. For instance, we made a tiny organization's reason for all friends had given same opinions. Thus, friends are well-being, if we are inseparable. On the other hand, a good friend is gifted of the God like a family member. For superb decision, we discuss with friends who are some correction and some adding and reduce from summited discussion. For example, Tuhin, who is my best friend, he always good advice, like I wanted to invest in a financial organization after that he was an investigation, then he forgotten me that company investment that why I was not losing money. So, good friends opposite opinion to erroneous jobs. To recapitulate, everybody has some friends who are for get-together, enjoyment, but those someones are better who is not agreeing opinion for friends well. In conclusion, this essay discussed about type of friends. Some always positive and someone positive and negative both. However, friends all time to be enthusiastic, some better mate's correct opinion for more jubilant in the future.
Universal truth that
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friend
is blessing for us. Someone
Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: "vibes".
vibe
that
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friends
always same
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idea
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agrees
and other contemplate that
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good
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friends
are something against unsuitable
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opinions
. This essay will discuss both in
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details
and why
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good
mate is
Consider using a past participle here: "disagreed".
disagree
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some
time.

On the one hand,
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friends
are not
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only
for time passing,
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but
also
, they are doing
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many
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good
activities. Most of the success from unity with
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friends
such as
first
business concept, travel plan and other jobs. Addition, if we work same mentally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
, then
Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'they'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
they goal
achieves easier.
For instance
, we made a tiny organization's reason for all
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friends
had
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given
same
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opinions
.
Thus
,
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friends
are well-being, if we are inseparable.

On the other hand
, a
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good
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friend
is gifted
of the God like a family member. For superb decision, we discuss with
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friends
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who
are
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some
correction and
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some
adding and
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reduce
from summited discussion.
For example
,
Possible spelling mistake found.
Tuhin
,
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who
is my best
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friend
, he always
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good
advice, like I wanted to invest in a financial organization after that he was an investigation, then he forgotten me that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
investment that why I was not losing money.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
,
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good
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friends
opposite
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opinion
to erroneous jobs.

To recapitulate, everybody has
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some
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friends
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who
are for
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get
-together, enjoyment,
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but
those someones are better
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who
The verb 'agreeing' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
is not agreeing
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opinion
for
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friends
well.

In conclusion
, this essay
Did you mean simply "discussed type"? You do not need the word "about" here.
discussed about type
of
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friends
.
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Some
always
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positive
and someone
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positive
and
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negative
both.
However
,
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friends
all time to be enthusiastic,
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some
better mate's correct
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opinion
for more jubilant in the future.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. v. 17

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
258 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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