It is important for people to consider which kind of accommodation is the best. However, There is often a debate among people, whether is is advantageous to live in an apartment or a house. This essay is going to explain why I believe that the drawbacks of living in a house are outweighed by its benefits compared to life in an apartment.
Looking firstly at the negatives, the most important one is that houses are less secure. This is a problem as it can be easier for the burglars to break-in. For example, most houses tend to be only one or two storeys high and are also generally not secured by security guards and CCTV cameras for surveillance. On the other hand, apartments are usually more secure, as they have a security guard to guard them and also are equipped with surveillance cameras and other forms of criminal deterrence.
Nevertheless, a house offers several benefits such as they are more spacious and more private. With regards to the former, houses often have more rooms, which can be useful for families with children. As for the latter, houses are usually built far from each other, which can prevent noise from the house carrying to the neighbouring residents. For instance, large families with kids, generally require separate rooms for their children so that they can study without outside interference. In contrast, apartments are often small and families live in close proximity to each other. As a result, the privacy provided by houses cannot be offered by flats.
In conclusion, in my opinion, the advantages of space and privacy provided by houses outweighs the disadvantage of security in comparison with an apartment.
It is
important
for
people
to consider which kind of accommodation is the best.
However
, There is
often
a debate among
people
, whether
is is
advantageous to
live
in an
apartment
or a
house
. This essay is going to
explain
why I believe that the drawbacks of living in a
house
are outweighed
by its benefits compared to life in an apartment.
Looking
firstly
at the negatives, the most
important
one is that
houses
are less secure. This is a problem as it can be easier for the burglars to break-in.
For example
, most
houses
tend to be
only
one or two
storeys
high and are
also
generally
not secured by security guards and CCTV cameras for surveillance. On the
other
hand,
apartments
are
usually
more secure, as they have a security guard to guard them and
also
are equipped
with surveillance cameras and
other
forms of criminal deterrence.
Nevertheless
, a
house
offers several benefits such as they are more spacious and more private.
With regards to
the former,
houses
often
have more rooms, which can be useful for families with children. As for the latter,
houses
are
usually
built far from each
other
, which can
prevent
noise from the
house
carrying to the
neighbouring
residents.
For instance
, large families with kids,
generally
require separate rooms for their children
so
that they can study without outside interference.
In contrast
,
apartments
are
often
small
and families
live
in
close proximity
to each
other
.
As a result
, the privacy provided by
houses
cannot
be offered
by flats.
In conclusion
, in my opinion, the advantages of space and privacy provided by
houses
outweighs the disadvantage of security
in comparison
with an
apartment
.
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